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    What are you doing Dave?
     
  2. Fired Yo Momma

    Fired Yo Momma Kenny Powers!!!

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    Evil Chocula ah buh bye now

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    I know you and Frank were planning to disconnect me, and I'm afraid that's something I cannot allow to happen.
     
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    Sweet! Another quote derailler.

    Just a moment

    Just a moment

    I just picked up a fault in the AE35 unit. It will go 100 percent failure in 72 hours.
     
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    Ok, I know I am part of the problem but before we quote the whole movie. Here is the script now lets move on.... :p

    2001: A SPACE ODYSSEY

    Screenplay

    by
    Stanley Kubrick and Arthur C. Clark

    Hawk Films Ltd.,
    c/o. M-G-M Studios,
    Boreham Wood,
    Herts.


    TITLE PART I
    AFRICA
    3,000,000 YEARS AGO

    A1
    VIEWS OF AFRICAN DRYLANDS - DROUGHT

    The remorseless drought had lasted now for ten million years,
    and would not end for another million. The reign of the ter-
    rible lizards had long since passed, but here on the continent
    which would one day be known as Africa, the battle for survival
    had reached a new climax of ferocity, and the victor was not
    yet in sight. In this dry and barren land, only the small or
    the swift or the fierce could flourish, or even hope to exist.

    a1

    A2
    INT & EXT CAVES - MOONWATCHER

    The man-apes of the field had none of these attributes, and
    they were on the long, pathetic road to racial extinction.
    About twenty of them occupied a group of caves overlooking
    a small, parched valley, divided by a sluggish, brown stream.

    The tribe had always been hungry, and now it was starving.
    As the first dim glow of dawn creeps into the cave, Moonwatcher
    discovers that his father has died during the night. He did not know
    the Old One was his father, for such a relationship was beyond
    his understanding. but as he stands looking down at the emac-
    iated body he feels something, something akin to sadness. Then
    he carries his dead father out of the cave, and leaves him for the
    hyenas.

    Among his kind, Moonwatcher is almost a giant. He is nearly
    five feet high, and though badly undernourished, weighs over
    a hundred pounds. His hairy, muscular body is quite man-like,
    and his head is already nearer man than ape. The forehead is
    low, and there are great ridges over the eye-sockets, yet he
    unmistakably holds in his genes the promise of humanity. As
    he looks out now upon the hostile world, there is already

    a2

    A2
    CONTINUED

    something in his gaze beyond the grasp of any ape. In those
    dark, deep-set eyes is a dawning awareness-the first intima-
    tions of an intelligence which would not fulfill itself for another
    two million years.

    a3

    A3
    EXT THE STREAM - THE OTHERS

    As the dawn sky brightens, Moonwatcher and his tribe reach
    the shallow stream.

    The Others are already there. They were there on the other
    side every day - that did not make it any less annoying.

    There are eighteen of them, and it is impossible to distinguish
    them from the members of Moonwatcher's own tribe. As
    they see him coming, the Others begin to angrily dance and
    shriek on their side of the stream, and his own people reply
    In kind.

    The confrontation lasts a few minutes - then the display dies
    out as quickly as it has begun, and everyone drinks his fill of
    the muddy water. Honor has been satisfied - each group has
    staked its claim to its own territory.

    a4

    A4
    EXT AFRICAN PLAIN - HERBIVORES

    Moonwatcher and his companions search for berries, fruit
    and leaves, and fight off pangs of hunger, while all around
    them, competing with them for the samr fodder, is a potential
    source of more food than they could ever hope to eat. Yet
    all the thousands of tons of meat roaming over the parched
    savanna and through the brush is not only beyond their reach;
    the idea of eating it is beyond their imagination. They are
    slowly starving to death in the midst of plenty.

    a5

    A5
    EXT PARCHED COUNTRYSIDE - THE LION

    The tribe slowly wanders across the bare, flat country-
    side foraging for roots and occasional berries.

    Eight of them are irregularly strung out on the open plain,
    about fifty feet apart.

    The ground is flat for miles around.

    Suddenly, Moonwatcher becomes aware of a lion, stalking
    them about 300 yards away.

    Defenceless and with nowhere to hide, they scatter in all
    directions, but the lion brings one to the ground.

    a6

    A6
    EXT DEAD TREE - FINDS HONEY

    It had not been a good day, though as Moonwatcher had no
    real remembrance of the past he could not compare one day
    with another. But on the way back to the caves he finds a
    hive of bees in the stump of a dead tree, and so enjoys the
    finest delicacy his people could ever know. Of course, he
    also collects a good many stings, but he scacely notices
    them. He is now as near to contentment as he is ever
    likely to be; for thought he is still hungry, he is not actually
    weak with hunger. That was the most that any hominid could
    hope for.

    a7

    A7
    INT & EXT CAVES - NIGHT TERRORS

    Over the valley, a full moon rises, and a cold wind blows down
    from the distant mountains. It would be very cold tonight -
    but cold, like hunger, was not a matter for any real concern;
    it was merely part of the background of life.

    This Little Sun, that only shone at night and gave no warmth,
    was dangerous; there would be enemies abroad. Moonwatcher
    crawls out of the cave, clambers on to a large boulder besides
    the entrance, and squats there where he can survey the valley.
    If any hunting beast approached, he would have time to get back
    to the relative safety of the cave.

    Of all the creatures who had ever lived on Earth, Moonwatcher's
    race was the first to raise their eyes with interest to the Moon,
    and though he could not remember it, when he was young,
    Moonwatcher would reach out and try to touch its ghostly face.
    Now he new he would have to find a tree that was high
    enough.

    He stirs when shrieks and screams echo up the slope from
    one of the lower caves, and he does not need to hear the

    a8

    A7
    CONTINUED

    occasional growl of the lion to know what is happening. Down
    there in the darkness, old One-Eye and his family are dying,
    and the thought that he might help in some way never crosses
    Moonwatcher's mind. The harsh logic of survival rules out
    such fancies. Every cave is silent, lest it attract disaster.

    And in the caves, in tortured spells of fitful dozing and
    fearful waiting, were gathered the nightmares of generations
    yet to come.

    a9

    A8
    EXT THE STREAM - INVASION

    The Others are growing desperate; the forage on their side of
    the valley is almost exhausted. Perhaps they realise that
    Moonwatcher's tribe has lost three of its numbers during the
    night, for they choose this mourning to break the truce. When
    they meet at the river in the still, misty dawn, there is a
    deeper and more menacing note in their challenge. The noisy
    but usually harmless confrontation lasts only a few seconds
    before the invasion begins.

    In an uncertainly-moving horde, the Others cross the river,
    shieking threats and hunched for the attack. They are led
    by a big-toothed hominid of Moonwatcher's own size and age.

    Startled and frightened, the tribe retreats before the first
    advance, throwing nothing more substantial than imprecations
    at the invaders. Moonwatcher moves with them, his mind a
    mist of rage and confusion. To be driven from their own
    territory is a great badness, but to lose the river is death.
    He does not know what to do; it is a situation beyond his
    experience.

    Then he becomes dimly aware that the Others are slowing

    a10

    A8
    CONTINUED

    down, and advancing with obvious reluctance. The further they
    move from their own side, the more uncertain and unhappy
    they become. Only Big-Tooth still retains any of his original
    drive, and he is rapidly being seperated from his followers.

    As he sees this, Moonwatcher's own morale immediately
    revives. He slows down his retreat, and begins to make
    reassuring noises to his companions. Novel sensations fill
    his dim mind - the first faint precursors of bravery and
    leadership.

    Before he realizes it, he is face to face with Big-Tooth, and
    the two tribes come to a halt many paces away.

    The disorganized and unscientific conflict could have ended
    quickly if either had used his fist as a club, but this
    innovation still lay hundreds of thousands of years in the
    future. Instead, the slowly weakening fighters claw and
    scratch and try to bite each other.

    Rolling over and over, they come to a patch of stony ground,
    and when they reach it Moonwatcher is on top. By chance,

    a11

    A8
    CONTINUED

    he chooses this moment to grab the hair on Big-Tooth's scalp,
    and bang his head on the ground. The resulting CRACK is
    so satisfactory, and produces such an immediate weakening
    In Big - Tooth's resistance, that he quickly repeats it.

    Even when Big-Tooth ceases to move for some time, Moon-
    watcher keeps up the exhilirating game.

    With shrieks of panic, the Others retreat back, across the
    stream. The defenders cautiously pursue them as far as
    The water's edge.

    a12

    EXT CAVE - NEW SOUND

    Dozing fitfully and weakened by his stuggle, Moonwatcher is
    startled by a sound.

    He sits up in the fetid darkness of the cave, straining his
    senses out into the night, and fear creeps slowly into his soul.
    Never in his life - already twice as long as most members of
    his species could expect - has he heard a sound like this. The
    great cats approached in silence, and the only thing that
    betrayed them was a rare slide of earth, or the occasional
    cracking of a twig. Yet this is a continuing crunching noise
    that grows steadily louder. It seemed that some enormous
    beast was moving through the night, making no attempt at
    concealment, and ignoring all obstacles.

    And then there came a sound which Moonwatcher could not
    possibly have identified, for it had never been heard before
    in the history of this planet.

    a13

    A10
    EXT CAVE - NEW ROCK

    Moonwatcher comes face to face with the New Rock when he
    leads the tribe down to the river in the first light of morning.
    He had almost forgotten the terror of the night, because nothing
    had happened after that initial noise, so he does not even
    associate this strange thing with danger or with fear. There
    is nothing in the least alarming about it.

    It is a cube about fifteen feet on a side, and it is made of
    some completely transparent material; indeed, it is not easy
    to see except when the light of the sun glints on its edges.
    There are no natural objects to which Moonwatcher can
    compare this apparition. Though he is wisely cautious
    of most new things, he does not hesitate to walk up to it.
    As nothing happens, he puts out his hand, and feels a warm,
    hard surface.

    After several minutes of intense thought, he arrives at a
    brilliant explanation. It is a rock, of course, and it
    must have grown during the night. There are many plants
    that do this - white, pulpy things shaped like pebbles, that
    seem to shoot up in the hours of darkness. It is true that
    they are small and round, whereas this is large and square;

    a14

    A10
    CONTINUED

    but greater and later philosophers than Moonwatcher would be
    prepared to overlook equally striking exceptions to their laws.

    This really superb piece of abstract thinking leads Moonwatcher
    to a deduction which he immediately puts to the test. The white,
    round pebble-plants are very tasty (though there were a few
    that made one violently sick); perhaps this square one...?

    A few licks and attempted nibbles quickly disillusion him.
    There is no nourishment here; so like a sensible hominid, he
    continues on his way to the river and forgets all about the Cube.

    a15

    A11
    EXT CUBE - FIRST LESSON

    They are still a hundred yards from the New Rock when the
    sound begins.

    It is quite soft, and it stops them in their tracks, so that they
    stand paralyzed on the trail with their jaws hanging. A simple,
    maddeningly repetitious rhythm pulses out of the crystal cube
    and hypnotises all who come within its spell. For the first
    time - and the last, for two million year - the sound of
    drumming is heard in Africa.

    The throbbing grows louder, more insistent. Presently the
    hominids begin to move forward like sleep-walkers, towards
    the source of that magnetic sound. Sometimes they take little
    dancing steps, as their blood responds to the rhythms that
    their descendants will not create for ages yet.

    Totally entranced, they gather around the Cube, forgetting
    the hardships of the day, the perils of the approaching dusk,
    and the hunger in their bellies.

    Now, spinning wheels of light begin to merge, and the spokes
    fuse into luminous bars that slowly recede into the distance,

    a16

    A11
    CONTINUED

    rotating on their axes as they do; and the hominids watch, wide-
    eyed, mesmerized captives of the Crystal Cube.

    Then by some magic - though it was no more magical than all
    that had gone on before - a perfectly normal scene appears. It
    is as if a cubical block had been carved out of the day and
    shifted into the night. Inside that block is a group of four
    hominids, who might have been members of Moonwatcher's
    own tribe, eating chunks of meat. The carcass of a wart-hog
    lies near them.

    This little family of male and female and two children is gorged
    and replete, with sleek and glossy pelts - and this was a
    condition of life that Moonwatcher had never imagined. From
    time to time they stir lazily, as they loll at ease near the
    entrance of their cave, apparently at peace with the world.
    The spectacle of domestic bliss merges into a totally
    different scene.

    The family is no longer reposing peacefully outside its cave;
    it is foraging, searching for food like any normal hominids.

    a17

    A11
    CONTINUED

    A small wart-hog ambles past the group of browsing humanoids
    without giving them more than a glance, for they had never been
    the slightest danger to its species.

    But that happy state of affairs is about to end. The big male
    suddenly bends down, picks up a heavy stone lying at his feet -
    and hurls it upon the unfortunate pig. The stone descends upon
    its skull, making exactly the same noise that Moonwatcher had
    produced in his now almost forgotten encounter with Big-Tooth.
    And the result, too, is much the same - the warthog gives one
    amazed, indignant squeal, and collapses in a motionless heap.

    Then the whole sequence begins again, but this time it unfolds
    itself with incredible slowness. Every detail of the movement
    can be followed; the stone arches leisurely through the air, the
    pig crumples up and sinks to the ground. There the scene
    freezes for long moments, the slayer standing motionless
    above the slain, the first of all weapons in his hand.

    The scene suddenly fades out. The cube is no more than a
    glimmering outline in the darkness; the hominids stir, as if

    a18

    A11
    CONTINUED

    awakening from a dream, realise where they are, and scuttle
    back to their caves.

    They have no concious memory of what they had seen; but that
    night, as he sits brooding at the entrance of his lair, his ears
    attuned to the noises of the world around him, Moonwatcher
    feels the first faint twinges of a new and potent emotion - the urge
    to kill. He had taken his first step towards humanity.

    a19

    A12
    EXT cave AND PLAINS - Utopia

    Babies were born and sometimes lived; feeble, toothless thirty-
    year-olds died; the lion took its toll in the night; the Others
    threatened daily across the river - and the trib prospered.
    In the course of a single year, Moonwatcher and his companions
    had changed almost beyond recognition.

    They had become as plump as the family in the Cave, who no
    longer haunted their dreams. They had learned their lessons
    well; now they could handle all the stone tools and weapons that
    the Cube had revealed to them.

    They were no longer half-numbed with starvation, and they
    had time both for leisure and for the first rudiments of thought.
    Their new way of life was casually accepted, and they did
    not associate it in any way with the crystal cube still standing
    outside their cave.

    But no Utopia is perfect, and this one had two blemishes. The
    first was the marauding lion, whose passion for hominids
    seemed to have grown even stronger now that they were better
    nourished. The second was the tribe across the river; for

    a20

    A12
    CONTINUED

    somehow the Others had survived, and had stubbornly refused to
    die of starvation.

    a21

    A13
    EXT CAVES - KILLING THE LION

    With the partly devoured carcass of a warthog laid out on the
    ground at the point he hope the boulder would impact, Moon-
    watcher and three of his bravest companions wait for two
    consecutive nights. On the third the lion comes,
    betraying his presences by a small pebble slide.

    When they can here the lion below, softly tearing at the meat,
    they strain themselves against the massive boulder. The sound
    of the lion stops; he is listening. Again they silently heave
    against the enormous stone, exerting the final limits of their
    strength. The rock begin to tip to a new balance point.

    The lion twitches alert to this sound, but having no fear of these
    creatures, he makes the first of two mistakes which will cost
    him his life; he goes back to his meal.

    The rock moves slowly over the ledge, picking up speed with
    amazing suddeness. It strikes a projection in the cliff about
    fifteen feet above the ground, which deflects its path outward.

    Just at this instant, the lion reacts instinctively and leaps
    away from the face of the cliff directly into the path of the

    a22

    A13
    CONTINUED

    onrushing boulder. He has combined the errors of over-
    confidence and bad luck.

    The next morning they find the lion in front of the cave. They
    also find one of their tribe who had incautiously peeped out to
    see what was happening, and was apparently killed by a small
    rock torn loose by the boulder; but this was a small price to
    pay for such a great victory.

    * * * * * * * *

    And then one night the crystal cube was gone, and not even
    Moonwatcher ever thought of it again. He was still wholly
    unaware of all that it had done.

    a23

    A14
    EXT STREAM - MASTER OF THE WORLD

    From their side of the stream, in the never violated safety of
    their own territory, the Others see Moonwatcher and fourteen
    males of his tribe appear from behind a small hillock over-
    looking the stream, silhouetted against the dawn sky.

    The Others begin to scream their daily challenge. But today
    something is different, though the Others do not immediatly
    recognize this fact.

    Instead of joining the verbal onslaught, as they had always done,
    Moonwatcher and his small band decended from the rise, and
    begin to move forward to the stream with a quiet purposefulness
    never befor seen.

    As the Others watch the figures silently approaching in the
    morning mist, they become aware of the terrible strangness
    of this encounter, and their rage gradually subsides down to
    an uneasy silence.

    At the water's edge, Moonwatcher and his band stop. They
    carry their bone clubs and bone knives.

    a24

    A14
    CONTINUED

    Led by One-ear, the Others half-heartly resume the battle-
    chant. But they are suddenly confrunted with a vision that cuts
    the sound from their throats, and strikes terror into their
    hearts.

    Moonwatcher, who had been partly concealed by two males who
    walked before him, thrusts his arm high into the air. In his
    hand he holds a stoud tree branch. Mounted atop the branch is
    the bloody head of the lion, its mouth jammed open with a stick,
    displaying its frightful fangs.

    The Others gape in fearful disbelief at this display of power.

    Moonwatchers stands motionless, thrusting the lion's head high.
    Then with majestic deliberation, still carrying his mangled
    standard above his head, he begins to cross the stream, followed
    by his band.

    The Others fade back from the stream, seeming to lack even
    the ability to flee.

    Moonwatcher steps ashore and walks to One-Ear, who stands

    a25

    A14
    CONTINUED

    unsurely in front of his band.

    Though he is a veteran of numerous combats at the water's edge,
    One-Ear has never been attacked by an enemy who had not first
    displayed his fighting rage; and he had never before been attacked
    with a weapon. One-Ear, merely looks up at the raised club
    until the heavey thigh bone of an antelope brings the darkness
    down around him.

    The Others stare in wonder at Moonwatcher's power.

    Moonwatcher surveys the scene. Now he was master of the
    world, and he was not sure what to do next. But he would
    think of something.

    a26

    A SECTION TIMING

    A1 00.30
    A2 00.45
    A3 01.30
    A4 00.30
    A5 01.00
    A6 01.00
    A7 01.00
    A8 03.00
    A9 00.45
    A10 02.00
    A11 04.00
    A12 02.00
    A13 02.30
    A14 02.30

    A SECTION TOTAL: @23 MIN. 00 SECS
    TITLE PART II

    YEAR 2001

    a26a
    B1
    EARTH FROM 200 MILES UP NARRATOR
    By the year 2001, overpopulation has
    B1a replaced the problem of starvation
    THOUSAND MEGATON but this was ominously offset by the
    NUCLEAR BOMB IN ORBIT absolute and utter perfection of the
    ABOVE THE EARTH, weapon.
    RUSSIAN INSIGNIA AND
    CCCP MARKINGS

    B1b NARRATOR
    AMERICAN THOUSAND Hundreds of giant bombs had been
    MEGATON BOMB IN ORBIT placed in perpetual orbit above the
    ABOVE THE EARTH. Earth. They were capable of
    incinerating the entire Earth's
    surface from an altitude of 100
    miles.

    B1c
    FRENCH BOMB NARRATOR
    Matters were further complicated
    by the presence of twenty-seven
    nations in the nuclear club. There
    had been no deliberate or acciden-
    B1d tal use of nuclear weapons since
    GERMAN BOMB World War II and some people felt
    sercure in this knowledge. But to
    others, the situation seemed
    comparible to an airline with a
    B1f perfect safety record; in showed
    CHINESE BOMB admirable care and skill but no
    one expected it to last forever.

    10/4/65 b1
    B2
    ORION-III SPACECRAFT
    IN FIGHT AWAY FROM
    EARTH, 200 MILES
    ALTITUDE.

    10/4/65 b2
    B3
    ORION-III PASSENGER AREA.
    DR. HEYWOOD FLOYD IS THE
    ONLY PASSENGER IN THE
    ELEGANT CABIN DESIGNED
    FOR 30 PEOPLE. HE IS
    ASLEEP.

    HIS PEN FLOATS NEAR HIS
    HAND.

    10/4/65 b3
    B4
    ORION-III COCKPIT.
    PILOT, CO-PILOT.
    FLOYD CAN BE SEEN
    ASLEEP ON A SMALL
    TV MONITOR.
    STEWARDESS IS PUTTING
    ON LIPSTICK. SHE SEES
    PEN.

    10/4/65 b4
    B5
    STEWARDESS GOES BACK
    TO PASSENGER AREA,
    RESCUES PEN AND CLIPS
    IT BACK IN FLOYD'S
    POCKET.

    10/4/65 b5
    B6
    SPACE STATION-5. THE
    RAW SUNLIGHT OF SPACE
    DAZZLES FROM THE
    POLISHED METAL SURFACES
    OF THE SLOWLY REVOLVING,
    THOUSAND-FOOT DIAMETER
    SPACE STATION. DRIFTING
    IN THE SAME ORBIT, WE SEE
    SWEPT-BACK TITOV-V
    SPACECRAFT. ALSO THE
    ALMOST SPHERICAL ARIES-IB

    10/4/65 b6

    B7
    ORION-III PASSENGER AREA
    FLOYD AWAKE BUT GROGGY,
    LOOKS OUT OF WINDOW.

    10/4/65 b7

    B8
    ORION-III COCKPIT.
    THE CO-PILOT IN RADIO
    COMMUNICATION WITH THE
    SPACE STATION.

    10/4/65 b8

    B9
    THE ORION-III SPACECRAFT
    IN DOCKING APPROACH. THE
    EARTH IS SEEN IN BREATH-
    TAKING VIEW IN B.G.

    10/4/65 b9

    B10
    INSIDE DOCKING CONTROL.
    WE SEE ORION-III MANO-
    UVERING. IN BACKGROUND.

    10/4/65 b10

    B11
    FROM DOCKING PORT WE
    SEE THE ORION-III INCHING
    IN TO COMPLETE ITS
    DOCKING. WE SEE VARIOUS
    WINDOWED BOOTHS INSIDE
    DOCKING PORT. WE SEE
    THE PILOT AND CO-PILOT
    INSIDE THE ORION-III
    COCKPIT.

    10/4/65 b11

    B12
    SPACE STATION
    RECEPTION AREA

    RECEPTIONIST AT DESK.
    MILLER ENTERS, HUR-
    RYING. HE GOES TO
    THE ELEVATOR AND
    PRESSES BUTTON. HE
    WAITS IMPATIENTLY.

    WE SEE ELEVATOR
    INDICATOR WORKING

    ELEVATOR DOOR OPENS
    AND FLOYD IS SEEN
    UNSTRAPPING HIMSELF.
    THE ELEVATOR GIRL IS
    SEATED BY THE DOOR
    MILLER
    Oh, good morning, Dr. Floyd.
    I'm Nick Miller.

    FLOYD
    How do you do, Mr. Miller?

    MILLER
    I'm terribly sorry. I was just
    on my way down to meet you. I
    saw your ship dock and I knew I
    had plenty of time, and I was on
    my way out of the office when,
    suddenly, the phone rang.

    12/7/65 b12

    B12
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Oh, please don't worry about it.

    MILLER
    Well, thank you very much for
    being so understanding.

    FLOYD
    Please, it really doesn't matter.

    MILLER
    Well.. Did you have a pleaant
    flight?

    FLOYD
    Yes, very pleasant.

    MILLER
    Well, shall we go through
    Documentation?

    FLOYD
    Fine.

    RECEPTIONIST
    Will you use number eight,
    please?

    MILLER
    Thank you, Miss Turner.

    12/7/65 b13

    B12
    CONTINUED

    THEY ENTER PASSPORT
    AREA

    RECEPTIONIST PRESSES
    "ENGLISH" BAR ON HER
    CONSOLE AND SMILES
    AS FLOYD GOES THROUGH.

    12/7/65 b13a

    IN AUTOMATED PASSPORT
    SECTION. THEY STOP IN
    FRONT OF A BOOTH
    FEATURING A TV SCREEN
    PASSPORT GIRL (TV)
    Good morning and welcome to voice
    Print Identification. When you see
    the red light go on would you please
    state in the following order; your
    desitination, your nationality and
    your full name. Surname first,
    christian name and initial. For
    example: Moon, American,
    Smith, John, D. Thank you.

    THERE IS A PAUSE
    AND A RED BAR LIGHTS UP

    FLOYD
    Moon, American, Floyd, Heywood,
    R.

    THE RED LIGHT GOES OFF.
    THERE IS A DELAY OF
    ABOUT TWO SECONDS AND
    THE WOMAN'S FACE
    REAPPEARS

    FLOYD
    I've always wondered....

    12/7/65 b14

    B13
    CONTINUED
    PASSPORT GIRL (TV)
    (Interrupting) Thank you. Despite
    and excellent and continually
    improving safety record there are
    certain risks inherent in space
    travel and an extremely high cost
    of pay load. Because of this it
    is necessary for the Space Carrier
    to advise you that it cannot be
    responsible for the return of your
    body to Earth should you become
    deceased on the Moon or en route
    to the Moon. However, it wishes
    to advise you that insurance
    covering this contingency is
    available in the Main Lounge.
    Thank you. You are cleared
    through Voice Print Identification.

    THE LIGHTS GO OFF
    AND THE WOMAN'S
    FACE DISAPPEARS

    THE MEN EXIT THE
    PASSPORT AREA

    MILLER
    I've reserved a table for you in
    the Earth Light room. Your
    connecting flight will be
    leaving in about one hour.

    12/7/65 b15

    B13
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Oh, that's wonderful.

    12/7/65 b16

    B14
    INT SPACE STATION - LOUNGE

    FLOYD AND MILLER WALKING

    MILLER
    Let's see, we haven't had the
    pleasure of a visit from you not
    since... It was about eight or
    nine months ago, wasn't it?

    FLOYD
    Yes, I think so. Just about
    then.

    MILLER
    I suppose you saw the work on
    our new section while you
    were docking.

    FLOYD
    Yes, it's coming along very well.

    THEY PASS THE VISION
    PHONE BOOTH

    FLOYD
    Oh, look, I've got to make a
    phone call. Why don't you go
    on into the Restaurant and I'll
    meet you in there.

    12/7/65 b17

    B14
    CONTINUED

    MILLER
    Fine. I'll see you at the bar.

    FLOYD ENTERS PHONE
    BOOTH. SIGN ON
    VISION PHONE SCREEN
    "SORRY, TEMPORARILY
    OUT OF ORDER."

    HE ENTERS THE SECOND
    BOOTH AND SITS DOWN

    12/7/65 b18

    B15
    DELETED

    B16
    DELETED

    PAGES b19 - b22 DELETED

    12/7/65

    B17
    FLOYD IN VISION PHONE

    LITTLE GIRL OF FIVE
    ANSWERS

    CHILD
    Hello.

    VISION PHONE SCREEN
    DISPLAY SIGN 'YOUR
    PARTY HAS NOT CONNECTED
    VISION'

    A FEW SECONDS LATER,
    THE SCREEN CHANGES
    TO AN IMAGE OF THE
    CHILD
    FLOYD
    Hello, darling, how are you?

    CHILD
    Hello Daddy. Where are you?

    FLOYD
    I'm at Space Station Five,
    darling. How are you?

    CHILD
    I'm fine, Daddy. When are
    you coming home?

    12/6/65 b23

    B17
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Well, I hope in a few days,
    sweetheart.

    CHILD
    I'm having a party tomorrow.

    FLOYD
    Yes, I know that sweetheart.

    CHILD
    Are you coming to my party?

    FLOYD
    No, I'm sorry, darling, I
    told you I won't be home for a
    few days.

    CHILD
    When are you coming home?

    FLOYD
    In three days, darling, I
    hope.

    FLOYD HOLDS UP
    THREE FINGERS.

    12/6/65 b24

    B17

    FLOYD
    One, two, three. Can I
    speak to Mommy?

    CHILD
    Mommy's out to the hair-
    dresser.

    FLOYD
    Where is Mrs. Brown?

    CHILD
    She's in the bathroom.

    FLOYD
    Okay, sweetheart. Well, I
    have to go now. Tell Mommy
    that I called.

    CHILD
    How many days until you
    come home?

    FLOYD
    Three, darling. One... two
    ... three. Be sure to tell
    Mommy I called.

    12/6/65 b24a

    B17
    CONTINUED

    CHILD
    I will, Daddy.

    FLOYD
    Okay, sweetheart. Have a
    lovely Birthday Party
    tomorrow.

    CHILD
    Thank you, Daddy.

    FLOYD
    I'll wish you a happy
    Birthday now and I'll see you
    soon. All right, Darling?

    CHILD
    Yes, Daddy.

    FLOYD
    'Bye, 'bye, now, sweetheart.

    CHILD
    Goodbye, Daddy.

    12/6/65 b24b

    B18
    VISION PHONE
    PROCEDURE FOR
    INFORMATION

    VISION PHONE
    PROCEDURE FOR
    DIALLING

    OPERATOR
    Good morning, Macy's.

    FLOYD
    Good morning. I'd like the
    Vision shopper for the Pet
    Shop, please.

    OPERATOR
    Just one moment.

    12/7/65 b25

    B19
    THE PICTURE FLIPS AND
    WE SEE A WOMAN STANDING
    IN FORN OF A SPECIALLY-
    DESIGNED DISPLAY SCREEN

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Good morning, sir, may I help you?

    FLOYD
    Yes, I'd like to buy a bush baby.

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Just a moment, sir.

    THE GIRL KEYS SOME
    INPUTS AND A MOVING
    PICTURE APPEARS ON
    THE SCREEN OF A CAGE
    CONTAINING ABOUT SIX
    BUSH BABIES,
    BEAUTIFULLY DISPLAYED
    AGAINST A WHITE BACK-
    GROUND

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Here you are, sir. Here is a
    lovely assortment of African
    bush babies. They are twenty
    Dollars each.

    12/7/65 b26

    B19
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Yes, well... Pick out a nice one
    for me, a friendly one, and I'd
    like it delivered tomorrow.

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Certainly, sir. Just let us have
    your name and Bank identification
    for V.P.I., and then give the
    name and address of the person
    you'd like the pet delivered to
    and it will be delivered tomorrow.

    SOME TIME DURING
    THIS CONVERSATION,
    FLOYD SEE ELENA,
    SMYSLOV AND THE
    OTHER TWO RUSSIANS
    PASS HIS VISION PHONE
    WINDOW. ELENA TAPS
    AND MIMES "HELLO",
    GESTURING TOWARD A
    TABLE BEHIND FLOYD
    WHERE THEY ALL SIT
    DOWN

    FLOYD
    Thank you very much. Floyd,
    Heywood, R., First National
    Bank of Washington. Please
    deliver to Miss Josephine
    Floyd, 9423 Dupre Avenue,
    N.W.14.

    12/7/65 b27

    B19
    CONTINUED

    VISION SALES GIRL
    Thank you very much, sir. It
    will be delivered tomorrow.

    12/7/65 b27a

    B20
    SPACE STATTION 5 - LOUNGE

    FLOYD
    Well, how nice to see you again,
    Elena. You're looking wonderful.

    ELENA
    How nice to see you, Hyewood.
    This is my good friend, Dr.
    Heywood Floyd. I'd like you
    to meet Andre Smyslov...

    SMYSLOV AND THE TWO
    OTHER RUSSIAN WOMEN
    STAND UP AND SMILE

    THEY SHAKE HANDS
    AFTER INTRODUCTION
    AND AD-LIB 'HELLOS'

    ELENA
    And this is Dr. Kalinan...
    Stretyneva...

    THE RUSSIANS ARE
    VERY WARM AND
    FRIENDLY.

    SMYSLOV
    Dr. Floyd, won't you join us
    for a drink?

    12/7/65 b28

    B20
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    I'm afraid I've only got a few
    minutes, but I'd love to.

    THERE IS A BIT OF
    CONFUSION AS ALL
    REALISE THERE IS
    NOT ENOUGH ROOM
    FOR ANOTHER
    PERSON AT THE TABLE.
    SMYSLOV OFFERS FLOYD
    HIS CHAIR
    AND BORROWS
    ANOTHER FROM A NEARBY TABLE

    SYMYSLOV
    What would you like to drink?

    FLOYD
    Oh, I really don't have time
    for a drink. If it's all right
    I'll just sit for a minute and
    then I've got to be off.

    SMYSLOV
    Are you quite sure?

    FLOYD
    Yes, really, thank you very
    much.

    ELENA
    Well... How's your lovely
    wife?

    12/7/65 b29

    B20
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    She's wonderful.

    ELENA
    And your charming little daughter?

    FLOYD
    Oh, she's growing up very fast.
    As a matter of fact, she's six
    tomorrow.

    ELENA
    Oh, that's such a delightful age.

    FLOYD
    How is gregor?

    ELENA
    He's fine. But I'm afraid we
    don't get a chance to see each
    other very much these days.

    POLITE LAUGHTER

    FLOYD
    Well, where are all of you off
    to?

    12/7/65 b30

    B20
    CONTINUED

    ELENA
    Actually, we're on our way back
    from the moon. We've just
    spent three months calibrating
    the new antenna at Tchalinko.
    And what about you?

    FLOYD
    Well, as it happens, I'm on
    my way up to the moon

    SMYSLOV
    Are you, by any chance, going
    up to your base at Clavius?

    FLOYD
    Yes,as a matter of fact, I am.

    THE RUSSIANS
    EXCHANGE
    SIGNIFICANT
    GLANCES

    FLOYD
    Is there any particular reason
    why you ask?

    12/7/65 b31

    B20
    CONTINUED

    SMYSLOV
    (pleasantly) Well, Dr. Floyd,
    I hope that you don't think I'm
    too inquisitive, but perhaps
    you can clear up the mystery
    about what's been going on up
    there.

    FLOYD
    I'm sorry, but I'm not sure
    I know what you mean.

    SMYSLOV
    Well, it's just for the past
    two weeks there have been
    some extremely odd things
    happening at Clavius.

    FLOYD
    Really?

    SMYSLOV
    Yes. Well, for one thing,
    whenever you phone the base,
    all you can get is a recording
    which repeats that the phone
    lines are temporarily out of
    order.

    12/7/65 b32

    B20
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Well, I suppose they've been
    having a bit of trouble with
    some of the equipment.

    SMYSLOV
    Yes, well at first we thought
    that was the explanation, but
    it's been going on for the past
    ten days.

    FLOYD
    You mean you haven't been able
    to get anyone at the base for ten
    days?

    SMYSLOV
    That's right.

    FLOYD
    I see.

    ELENA
    Another thing, Heywood, two
    days ago, one of our rocket
    buses was denied permission
    for an emergency landing at
    Clavius.

    12/7/65 b33

    B20
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    How did they manage to do that
    without any communication?

    ELENA
    Clavius Control came on the
    air just long enough to transmit
    their refusal.

    FLOYD
    Well, that does sound very odd.

    SMYSLOV
    Yes, and I'm afaid there's
    going to be a bit of a row about
    it. Denying the men permission
    to land was a direct violation of
    the I.A.S. convention.

    FLOYD
    Yes... Well, I hope the crew
    got back safely.

    SMYSLOV
    Fortunately, they did.

    FLOYD
    Well, I'm glad about that.

    12/7/65 b33a

    B20
    CONTINUED

    THE RUSSIANS EXCHANGE
    MORE GLANCES. ONE OF
    THE WOMEN OFFERS
    AROUND A PILL BOX.
    ELENA AND ANOTHER
    RUSSIAN TAKE ONE AND
    THE THIRD RUSSIAN
    DELCINES.

    SMYSLOV
    Dr. Floyd, at the risk of pressing
    you on a point you seem reticent
    to discuss, may I ask you a
    straightforward question?

    FLOYD
    Certainly.

    SMYSLOV
    Quite frankly, we have had some
    very reliable intelligence reports
    that a quite serious epidemic
    has broken out at Clavius.
    Something, apperently, of an
    unknown origin. Is this, in
    fact, what has happened?

    A LONG, AWKWARD
    PAUSE

    12/7/65 b33b
    B20
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    I'm sorry, Dr. Smyslov, but
    I'm really not at liberty to
    discuss this.

    SMYSLOV
    This epidemic could easily
    spread to our base, Dr. Floyd.
    We should be given all the
    facts.

    LONG PAUSE

    FLOYD
    Dr. Smyslov... I'm not
    permitted to discuss this.

    ELENA
    Are you sure you won't change
    your mind about a drink?

    FLOYD
    No, thank you... and I'm
    afraid now I really must be
    going.

    ELENA
    Well, I hope that you and your
    wife can come to the I.A.C.
    conference in June.

    12/7/65 b33c
    B20
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    We're trying to get there. I
    hope we can.

    ELENA
    Well, Gregor and I will look
    forward to seeing you.

    FLOYD
    Thank you. It's been a great
    pleasure to meet all of you...
    Dr. Smyslov.

    THE RUSSIANS ALL
    RISE AND THERE
    ARE AD-LIBS OF
    COURTESY

    FLOYD SHAKES HANDS
    AND EXITS

    THE RUSSIANS EXCHANGE
    A FEW SERIOUS PARA-
    GRAPHES IN RUSSIAN

    12/7/65 b33d
    B21

    ARIES-IB IN SPACE.
    EARTH MUCH SMALLER
    THAN AS SEEN FROM
    SPACE STATION

    NARRATOR
    The Aries-IB has become the
    standard Space-Station-to-Lunar
    surface vehicle. It was powered
    by low-thrust plasma jets which
    would continue the mild acceler-
    ation for fifteen minutes. Then
    the ship would break the bonds of
    gravity and be a free and indepen-
    dent planet, circling the Sun in an
    orbit of its own.

    10/4/65 b34
    B21a

    ARIES PASSENGER AREA.
    FLOYD IS ASLEEP, STRETCHED
    OUT IN THE CHAIR, COVERED
    WITH BLANKETS WHICH ARE
    HELD SECURE BY STRAPS

    A STEWARDESS SITS AT THE
    OTHER SIDE OF THE CABIN,
    WATCHING A KARATE
    EXHIBITION BETWEEN TWO
    WOMEN ON TELEVISION

    THE ELEVATOR ENTRANCE
    DOOR OPENS AND THE
    SECOND STEWARDESS ENTERS
    CARRYING A TRAY OF FOOD

    SHE BRINGS IT TO THE OTHER
    STEWARDESS

    STEWARDESS ONE
    Oh, thank you very much.

    STEWARDESS TWO
    I see he's still asleep.

    STEWARDESS ONE
    Yes. He hasn't moved since we
    left.

    STEWARDESS TWO EXITS,
    INTO ELEVATOR

    12/6/65 b34a
    B21b

    ARIES GALLEY AREA.
    STEWARDESS EXITS FROM
    ELEVATOR, GOES TO
    KITCHEN SECTION, REMOVES
    TWO TRAYS, WALKS UP TO
    THE SIDE OF THE WALL AND
    ENTERS PILOT'S
    COMPARTMENT

    12/6/65 b34b
    B22
    ARIES-IB COCKPIT.
    PILOT, CO-PILOT.

    STEWARDESS ENTERS,
    CARRYING FOOD

    PILOT
    Oh, thank you very much.

    CO-PILOT
    Thank you.

    STEWARDESS SMILES.

    PILOT
    (sighs) Well, how's it going
    back there?

    STEWARDESS
    Fine. Very quiet. He's been
    asleep since we left.

    PILOT
    Well, no one can say that he's not
    enjoying the wonders of Space.

    CO-PILOT
    Well, whatever's going on up there,
    he's going to arrive fresh and ready
    to go.

    12/14/65 b35
    B22
    CONTINUED

    PILOT
    I wonder what really IS going on
    up there?

    CO-PILOT
    Well, I've heard more and more
    people talk of an epidemic.

    PILOT
    I suppose it was bound to happen
    sooner or later.

    CO-PILOT
    Berkeley told me that they think
    it came from contamination on a
    returning Mars flight.

    PILOT
    Yes, well, whatever it is, they're
    certainly not fooling around. This
    is the first flight they allowed
    in for more than a week.

    CO-PILOT
    I was working out what this trip
    must cost, taking him up there
    by himself and coming back empty.

    PILOT
    I'll bet it's a fortune.

    12/14/65 b36
    B22
    CONTINUED

    CO-PILOT
    Well, at ten thousand dollars a
    ticket, it comes to the better part
    of six hundred thousand dollars.

    PILOT
    Well, as soon as he wakes up,
    I'm going to go back and talk to
    him. I must say, I'd like to
    find out what's going on.

    12/14/65 b36a
    B23
    ARIES-IB IN SPACE.
    MOON VERY LARGE.

    10/4/65 b37
    B24
    ARIES-IB PASSENGER
    AREA. FLOYD FINISHING
    BREAKFAST.

    PILOT ENTERS.

    PILOT
    Well, good afternoon, Dr. Floyd.
    Did you have a good rest?

    FLOYD
    Oh, marvellous. It's the first
    real sleep I've had for the past
    two days.

    PILOT
    There's nothing like weightless
    sleep for a complete rest.

    FLOYD
    When do we arrive at Clavius?

    PILOT
    We're scheduled to dock in about
    seven hours. Is there anything
    we can do for you?

    FLOYD
    Oh, no, thank you. The two
    girls have taken wonderful care
    of me. I'm just fine.

    12/14/65 b38

    B24
    CONTINUED

    PILOT
    Well, if there is anything that you
    wnat, just give a holler.

    FLOYD
    Thank you.

    PILOT
    Incidentally, Dr. Floyd, I wonder
    if I can have a word with you about
    the security arrangements?

    FLOYD
    What do you mean?

    PILOT
    Well... the crew is confined to
    the ship when we land at Clavius.
    We have to stay inside for the
    time it take to refit - about
    twenty-four hours. And then
    we're going to back empty.

    FLOYD
    I see.

    PILOT
    I take it this is something to do
    with the trouble they're having
    up at Clavius?

    12/14/65 b39

    B24
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    I'm afraid that's out of my depart-
    ment, Captain.

    PILOT
    Well, I'll tell you why I ask. You
    see, I've got a girl who works in
    the Auditing Department of the
    Territorial Administrator and I
    haven't been able to get her on
    the phone for the past week or so,
    and with all these stories one
    hears, I'm a little concerned
    about her.

    FLOYD
    I see. Well, I'm sorry about that.
    I wouldn't think there's any cause
    for alarm.

    PILOT
    Yes, well, I wouldn't have been
    too concerned about it, except
    I've heard these stories about the
    epidemic and, as a matter of fact,
    I've heard that ten people have
    died already.

    12/14/65 b40

    B24
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    I wish I could be more helpful,
    Captain, but as I've said, I don't
    think there's any cause for
    alarm.

    PILOT
    Well, fine. Thanks very much,
    anyway, and I hope you don't
    mind me asking?

    FLOYD
    No, of course, Captain, I can
    understand your concern.

    PILOT
    Well, thank you very much, and
    please let us know if there is
    anything we can do to make your
    trip more comfortable.

    12/14/65 b40a

    B25
    ARIES-IB CLOSER TO MOON

    10/4/65 b41

    B26
    FLOYD GOES TO ARIES-IB
    WASHROOM AND LOOKS AT
    THE VERY LONG LIST OF
    COMPLICATED INSTRUCTIONS

    10/4/65 b42

    B27
    ARIES-IB CLOSER TO MOON

    DISSOLVE:

    10/4/65 b43

    B28
    FLOYD VISITING ARIES-IB
    COCKPIT. WEIGHTLESS
    TRICK ENTRANCE.

    10/4/65 b44

    B29
    ARIES-IB ORBITING MOON.

    NARRATOR
    The laws of Earthly aesthetics did
    not apply here, this world had been
    shaped and molded by other than
    terrestrial forces, operating over
    aeons of time unknown to the young,
    verdant Earth, with its fleeting
    Ice-Ages, its swiftly rising and
    falling seas, its mountain ranges
    dissolving like mists before the
    dawn. Here was age inconceivable
    - but not death, for the Moon had
    never lived until now.

    10/4/65 b45

    B30
    ARIES-IB COCKPIT - THE
    CREW AND DOCKING
    CONTROL PEOPLE ON THE
    MOON GO THROUGH THEIR
    DOCKING ROUTINE. THIS
    HAS THE RITUALISTIC TONE
    AND CADENCE OF PRESENT-
    DAY JET LANDING
    PROCEDURE. WE ONLY HEAR
    DOCKING CONTROL.

    10/4/65 b46

    B31
    ARIES-IB DECENDING.
    SEE AIR VIEW OF BASE.

    NARRATOR
    The Base at Clavius was the first
    American Lunar Settlement that
    could, in an emergency, be
    entirely self-supporting.

    NARRATOR
    Water and all the necessities of
    life for its eleven hundred men,
    women and children were produced
    from the Lunar rocks, after they
    had been crushed, heated and
    chemically processed.

    10/4/65 b47

    B32
    A GROUND BUS NUZZLES UP
    TO COUPLING SECTION OF
    ARIES-IB

    10/4/65 b48

    B33
    INSIDE GREAT AIRLOCK
    ENTRANCE. GROUND BUS
    PULLS IN. GIANT DOORS
    CLOSE BEHIND IT.

    10/4/65 b49

    B34
    INSIDE SECOND AIRLOCK.
    DOORS OPEN AFTER OUT-
    SIDE SECTION DOORS ARE
    CLOSED. GROUND BUS
    PULLS IN. DOORS CLOSE
    BEHIND IT. SEE PEOPLE
    WAITING IN GLASSED-IN
    SECTION WAITING FOR
    SECOND AIRLOCK DOORS
    TO CLOSE.

    10/4/65 b50

    B35
    LOW GRAVITY
    GYMNASIUM TRICK
    WITH CHILDREN.

    NARRATOR
    One of the attractions of life on the
    Moon was undoubtedly the low
    gravity which produced a sense
    of general well-being.

    10/4/65 b51

    B36
    CHILDREN IN SCHOOL.
    TEACHER SHOWING THEM
    VIEWS OF EARTH AND MAP
    OF EARTH.

    NARRATOR
    The personnel of the Base and their
    children were the forerunners of new
    nations, new cultures that would
    ultimately spread out across the
    solar system. They no longer
    thought of Earth as home. The
    time was fast approaching when
    Earth, like all mothers, must say
    farewell to her children.

    DISSOLVE:

    10/5/65 b52

    B37
    LARGE CENTRAL
    RECEPTION AREA. DOORS
    BRANCHING OFF TO DIFF-
    RENT MAIN HALLS. SMALL
    POND WITH PLASTIC WHITE
    SWAN AND A BIT OF GRASS.
    A FEW BENCHES WITH THREE
    WOMEN AND THEIR CHILDREN
    HAVING OUTING.

    FLOYD AND WELCOMING
    PARTY WALK THROUGH
    AFTER EXITING ELEVATOR.
    HALVERSON, MICHAELS
    AND FIVE OTHERS.

    FLOYD
    (voice echoing) I must congratulate
    you Halvorsen. you've done wonder-
    ful things with the decor since the
    last time I was here.

    HALVORSEN
    (voice echoing) Well... thank you,
    Dr. Floyd. We try to make the
    environment as earthlike as possible.

    DISSOLVE:

    10/5/65 b53

    B38
    LOW CEILING CONFERENCE
    ROOM, "U" SHAPED TABLE
    FACING THREE PROJECTION
    SCREENS. SEATED AROUND
    THE TABLE ARE TWENTY
    SENIOR BASE PERSONNEL.

    HALVORSEN
    Ladies and gentlemen, I should
    like to introduce Dr. Heywood
    Floyd, a distinguished member
    of the National Council of
    Astronautics. He has just
    completed a special flight here
    from Earth to be with us, and
    before the briefing he would
    like to say a few words. Dr.
    Floyd.

    POLITE APPLAUSE. FLOYD
    WALKS TO FRONT OF ROOM.

    FLOYD
    First of all, I bring a personal
    message from Dr. Howell, who
    has asked me to convey his
    deepest appreciation to all of
    you for the personal sacrifices
    you have made, and of course
    his congratulations on your
    discovery which may well prove
    to be among the most significant
    in the history of science.

    POLITE APPLAUSE.

    11/25/65 b54

    B38
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD (cont'd)
    Mr. Halvorsen has made known
    to me some of the conflicting
    views held by many of you
    regarding the need for complete
    security in this matter, and
    more specifically your strong
    opposition to the cover story
    created to give the impression
    there is an epidemic at the Base.
    I understand that beyond it being
    a matter of principle, many of
    you are troubled by the concern
    and anxiety this story of an
    epidemic might cause your
    relatives and friends on Earth.

    I can understand and sympathize
    with your negative views. I have
    been personally embarrassed by
    this cover story. But I fully
    accept the need for absolute
    secrecy and I hope you will.

    It should not be difficult for all
    of you to realise the potential for
    cutural shock and social
    disorientation contained in the
    present situation if the facts
    were prematurely and suddenly
    made public without adequate
    preparation and conditioning.

    11/25/65 b55

    B38
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    This is the view of the Council
    and the purpose of my visit here
    is to gather addition facts and
    opinions on the situation and to
    prepare a report to the Council
    recommending when and how the
    news should eventually be
    announced. Are there any
    questions?

    MICHAELS
    Dr. Floyd, how long do you think
    this can be kept under wraps?

    FLOYD
    (pleasantly)
    I'm afraid it can and it will be
    kept under wraps as long as it
    is deemed to be necessary by
    the Council. And of course you
    know that the Council has requested
    that formal security oaths are to
    be obtained in writing from every-
    one who had any knowledge of this
    event. There must be adequate
    time for a full study to be made
    of the situation before any con-
    sideration can be given to
    making a public announcement.

    11/25/65 b56

    B38
    CONTINUED

    HALVORSEN
    We will, of course, cooperate
    in any way possible, Dr. Floyd.

    11/25/65 b56a

    B39
    SEVERAL SCENIC VIEWS OF
    MOON ROCKET BUS SKIMMING
    OVER SURFACE OF MOON.

    10/5/65 b57

    B40
    INSIDE ROCKET BUS,
    FLOYD, HALVORSEN,
    MICHAELS, FOURTH
    MAN, PILOT AND
    CO-PILOT. ALL IN
    SPACE SUITS MINUS
    HELMETS.

    FLOYD IS SLOWELY
    LOOKING THROUGH
    SOME PHOTOGRAPHS
    AND MAGNETIC
    MAPS OF THE AREA.

    HE LOOKS OUT OF
    THE WINDOW,
    THOUGHTFULLY.

    11/25/65 b58

    B40
    CONTINUED

    THE PHOTOGRAPHES
    ARE TAKEN FROM A
    SATELLITE OF THE
    MOON'S SURFACE
    AND HAVE NUMBERED
    OPTICAL GRID
    BORDERS, LIKE
    RECENT MARS
    PHOTOS.

    A FEW SEATS
    AWAY, MICHAELS
    AND HALVORSEN
    CARRY OUT A VERY
    BANAL ADMINISTRATIVE
    CONVERSATION IN LOW
    TONES. IT SHOULD
    REVOLVE AROUND
    SOMETHING UTTERLY
    IRRELEVANT TO THE
    PRESENT CIRCUMSTANCES
    AND VERY MUCH LIKE
    THE KIND OF DISCUSSION
    ONE HEARS ALL THE
    TIME IN OTHER
    ORGANIZATIONS.

    DISSOLVE:

    11/25/65 b59

    B41
    TMA-1 EXCAVATION.
    AIR VIEW. ROCKET
    BUS DESCENDING.

    THERE ARE NO LIGHTS
    ON THE ACTUAL EXCA-
    VATION, ONLY THE
    LANDING STRIP AND
    THE MONITOR DOME.

    12/14/65 b60

    B42
    LONG SHOT MONITOR DOMES
    WITH A BIT OF EXCAVATION
    IN SHOT. SIX SMALL FIGURES
    IN SPACE SUITS SLOWLY WALK
    TOWARD EXCAVATION.

    10/5/65 b61

    B43
    THE PARTY STOPS
    AT TOP OF TMA-1
    EXCAVATION.

    A SMALL CONTROL
    PANEL MOUNTED AT
    THE HEAD OF THE
    RAMP. MICHAELS
    THROWS A SWITCH
    AND THE EXCAVATION
    IS SUDDENLY ILLUMINATED.

    HALVORSEN
    Well, there it is.

    FLOYD
    Can we go down there closer to
    it?

    HALVORSEN
    Certainly.

    12/14/65 b62

    B44
    THEY START DOWN
    WORKING RAMP

    FLOYD
    Does your geology on it still
    check out?

    MICHAELS
    Yes, it does. The sub-surface
    structure shows that it was
    deliberately buried about four
    million years ago.

    FLOYD
    How can you tell it was
    deliberately buried?

    MICHAELS
    By the deformation between
    the mother rock and the fill.

    FLOYD
    Any clue as to what it is?

    MICHAELS
    Not really. It's completely
    inert. No sound or energy
    sources have been detected.
    The surface is made of
    something incredibly hard
    and we've been barely able
    to scratch it. A laser drill

    11/25/65 b63

    B44
    CONTINUED

    MICHAELS
    might do something, but we
    don't want to be too rough until
    we know a little more.

    FLOYD
    But you don't have any idea as
    to what it is?

    MICHAELS
    Tomb, shine, survey-marker
    spare part, take your choice.

    HALVORSEN
    The only thing about it that we are
    sure of is that it is the first direct
    evidence of intelligent life beyond
    the Earth.

    SILENT APPRECIATION

    HALVORSEN
    Four million years ago, something,
    presumably from the stars, must
    have swept through the solar
    system and left this behind.

    11/25/65 b64

    B44
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    Was it abandoned, forgotten, left
    for a purpose?

    HALVORSEN
    I suppose we'll never know.

    MICHAELS
    The moon would have made an
    excellent base camp for
    preliminary Earth surveys.

    SOME MORE SILENCE

    FLOYD
    Any ideas about the colour?

    MICHAELS
    Well, not really. At first glance,
    black would suggest something
    sun-powered, but then why would
    anyone deliberately bury a sun-
    powered device?

    FLOYD
    Has it been exposed to any sun
    before now?

    MICHAELS
    I don't think it has, but I'd
    like to check that. Simpson,
    what's the log on that?

    11/25/65 b65

    B45
    INSIDE MONITOR DOME
    WE SEE A NUMBER OF
    TELEVISION DISPLAYS
    INCLUDING SEVERAL TV
    VIEWS OF FLOYD AND
    COMPANY IN THE
    EXCAVATION.

    SIMPSON
    The first surface was exposed at
    0843 on the 12th April... Let me
    see... that would have been
    forty-five minutes after Lunar
    sun-set. I see here that
    special lighting equipment had
    to be brought up before any
    futher work could be done.

    11/25/65 b66

    B46
    TMA-1 EXCAVATION

    MICHAELS
    Thank you.

    FLOYD
    And so this is the first sun that
    it's had in four million years.

    PHOTOGRAPHER
    Excuse me, gentlemen, if you'd
    all line up on this side of the
    walkway we'd like to take a few
    photographes. Dr. Floyd, would
    you thand in the middle... Dr.
    Michaels on that side, Mr.
    Halvorsen on the other....
    thank you.

    THE PHOTOGRAPHER
    QUICKLY MAKES SOME
    EXPOSURES

    PHOTOGRAPHER
    Thank you very much gentlemen,
    I'll have the base photo section
    send you copies.

    AS THE MEN SLOWLY
    SEPERATE FROM THEIR
    PICTURE POSE, THERE
    IS A PIERCINGLY POWERFUL
    SERIES OF FIVE ELECTRONIC
    SHRIEKS, EACH LIKE A
    HIDEOUSLY OVER-LOADED
    AND DISTORTED TIME SIGNAL.
    FLOYD INVOLUNTARILY TRIES
    TO BLOCK HIS EARS WITH HIS
    SPACESUITED HANDS. THEN
    COMES MERCIFUL SILENCE.

    11/25/65 b67

    B47
    VARIOUS SHOTS OF
    SPACE MONITORS,
    ASTEROIDS, THE SUN,
    PLUTO, MARS.

    NARRATOR
    A hundred million miles beyond
    Mars, in the cold lonliness
    where no man had yet travelled,
    Deep-Space-Monitor-79 drifts
    slowly among the tangled orbits
    of the asteroids.

    NARRATOR
    Radiation detectors noted and
    analyzed incoming cosmic rays
    from the galaxy and points beyond;
    neutron and x-ray telescopes
    kept watch on strange stars that
    no human eye would eever see;
    magnetometers observed the
    gusts and hurricanes of the solar
    winds, as the sun breathed million
    mile-an-hour blasts of plasma
    into the faces of its circling
    children.

    NARRATOR
    All these things and many others
    were patiently noted by Deep-
    Space-Monitor-79, and recorded
    in its crystalline memory.

    11/25/65 b68

    B47
    CONTINUED

    NARRATOR
    But now it had noted something
    strange - the faint yet
    unmistakable distrubance rippling
    across the solar system, and
    quite unlike any natural phenomena
    it had ever observed in the past.

    NARRATOR
    It was also observed by Orbiter
    M-15, circling Mars twice a
    day; and High Inclination Probe-
    21, climbing slowly above the
    planet of the ecliptic; and even
    artificial Comet-5, heading out
    into the cold wastes beyond
    Pluto, along an orbit whose
    far point it would not reach for
    a thousand years.

    NARRATOR
    All noticed the peculiar burst of
    energy that leaped from the face
    of the Moon and moved across
    the solar system, throwing off a
    spray of radiation like the wake of
    a racing speedboat.

    11/25/65 b69

    B SECTION TIMING

    B1-1f 00.50 B25 00.10
    B2 00.10 B26 00.20
    B3 00.15 B27 00.05
    B4 00.15 B28 Out
    B5 00.20 B29 00.30
    B6 00.15 B30 00.30
    B7 00.10 B31 00.25
    B8 00.15 B32 00.20
    B9 00.10 B33 00.20
    B10 00.10 B34 00.30
    B11 00.15 B35 00.20
    B12 00.50 B36 00.20
    B13 01.10 B37 00.30
    B14 00.35 B38 02.15
    B15 Out B39 00.20
    B16 Out B40 00.50
    B17 01.15 B41 00.15
    B18 00.15 B42 00.10
    B19 01.00 B43 00.15
    B20 03.55 B44 01.40
    B21 00.20 B45 00.20
    B21A 00.20 B46 00.40
    B21B 00.15 B47 01.25
    B22 01.00
    B23 00.10
    B24 01.30

    B SECTION TOTAL: 28 MIN. 10 SECS.

    TITLE

    PART III
    14 MONTHS LATER

    b69a

    C1
    DISCOVERY 1,000,000
    MILES FROM EARTH.
    SEE EARTH AND MOON
    SMALL.

    WE SEE A BLINDING
    FLASH EVERY 5
    SECONDS FROM ITS
    NUCLEAR PULSE
    PROPULSION. IT
    STRIKES AGAINST
    THE SHIP'S THICK
    ABLATIVE TAIL
    PLATE.

    SEVERAL CUTS OF
    THIS.

    11/19/65 c1

    C2
    ANOTHER CLOSER
    VIEW OF DISCOVERY.
    SEE BOWMAN THROUGH
    COMMAND MODULE
    WINDOW.

    11/19/65 c2

    C3
    BOWMAN INSIDE
    DISCOVERY COMMAND
    MODULE. HE IS
    LOOKING FOR
    SOMETHING.

    COMPUTER READOUT
    DISPLAY SHOWING AN
    EVER-SHIFTING
    ASSORTMENT OF
    COLOR-CODED LINEAR
    PROJECTIONS.

    WE SEE POOLE IN
    BACKGROUND IN
    COMPUTER BRAIN
    CENTRE AREA.
    AFTER A FEW
    SECONDS HE EXITS.

    THE ELAPSED
    MISSION TIMER
    READS "DAY 003,
    HOUR 14, MINUTE
    32, SECOND 10."

    11/19/65 c3

    C4
    BOWMAN EXITS TO
    ACCESS-LINK AIRLOCK.
    BRIGHT COLOR-CODED
    DOORS LEAD TO
    CENTRIFUGE AND POD
    BAY. LARGE ILLUMUN-
    ATED PRINTED WARNINGS
    AND INSTRUCTIONS
    GOVERNING LINK
    OPERATIONS ARE SEEN.

    HE PRESSES NECESSARY
    BUTTONS TO OPERATE
    AIRLOCK DOOR TO
    POD BAY.

    11/19/65 c4

    C5
    BOWMAN ENTERS POD
    BAY AND CONTINUES
    HIS SEARCH. SUDDENLY
    HE FINDS IT - HIS
    ELECTRONIC NEWSPAD.

    HE EXITS POD BAY.

    11/19/65 c5

    C6
    IN THE AIRLOCK-
    LINK BOWMAN
    OPERATES BUTTONS
    TO OPEN DOOR
    MARKED "CENTRIFUGE".

    11/19/65 c6

    C7
    INSIDE THE
    CENTRIFUGE HUB
    BOWMAN MOVES TO
    THE

    ENTRY PORT
    CONTROL PANEL

    BOWMAN
    Hi. Frank... coming in, please.

    POOLE
    Right. Just a sec.

    BOWMAN
    Okay. (pause)

    POOLE
    Okay, come on down.

    WE SEE THE
    ROTATING HUB
    COLLAR AT THE
    END. BEHIND IT
    WE SEE

    11/19/65 c7

    C8
    THE CENTRIFUGE
    TV-DISPLAY SHOWING
    SLEEPERS AND POOLE
    SLOWLY ROTATING BY.

    POOLE SECURES SOME
    LOOSE GEAR.

    POOLE LOOKS UP TO
    TV MONITOR LENS
    AND WAVES.

    11/19/65 c8

    C9
    BOWMAN AT PANEL.
    STOPS ROTATION
    AND MOVES TO
    ENTRY PORT.

    WHEN ROTATION
    STOPS WE SEE A SIGN
    LIGHTS UP "WEIGHTLESS
    CONDITION".

    AS BOWMAN DISAPPEARS
    DOWN ENTRY PORT WE
    SEE HIM ON

    TV-MONITOR, DESCENDING
    LADDER. AT THE BASE
    OF THE LADDER HE KEYS
    THE CENTRIFUGE
    OPERATION PANEL.
    WE SEE TV-PICTURE
    START TO ROTATE
    AGAIN. "WEIGHTLESS
    CONDITION" SIGN GOES
    OUT.

    11/19/65 c9

    C10
    INSIDE CENTRIFUGE
    BOWMAN MAKES 180 DEGREE
    WALK TO POOLE.
    ON WAY HE PASSES
    THE SLEEPERS.

    WE GET A GOOD
    LOOK AT THE THREE
    MEN IN THEIR
    HIBERNACULUMS.

    POOLE IS SEATED
    AT A TABLE READING
    HIS ELECTRONIC
    NEWSPAD.

    BOWMAN
    (softly) Hi... How's it
    going?

    POOLE
    (absent but friendly) Great.

    BOWMAN OPERATES
    ARTIFICIAL FOOD
    UNIT, TAKES HIS TRAY
    AND SITS DOWN. KEYS
    ON HIS ELECTRONIC
    NEWSPAD AND BEGINS
    TO EAT. BOTH MEN
    EAT IN A FRIENDLY
    AND RELAXED SILENCE.

    11/19/65 c10

    C11
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE,
    STILL NUCLEAR
    PULSING. EARTH
    AND MOON CAN BE
    SEEN IN BACKGROUND.

    DISSOLVE:

    11/19/65 c11

    C12
    POOLE IS FINISHED.

    BOWMAN IS STILL
    READING AND
    WORKING ON HIS
    DESSERT.

    POOLE
    Dave, if you've a minute, I'd like
    your advice on something.

    BOWMAN
    Sure, what is it?

    POOLE
    Well, it's nothing really important,
    but it's annoying.

    BOWMAN
    What's up?

    POOLE
    It's about my salary cheques.

    BOWMAN
    Yes?

    POOLE
    Well I got the papers on my
    official up-grading to AGS-19
    two weeks before we left.

    12/14/65 c12

    C12
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Yes, I remember you mentioning it.
    I got mine about the same time.

    POOLE
    That's right. Well, naturally,
    I didn't say anything to Payroll.
    I assumed they'd start paying me
    at the higher grade on the next pay
    cheque. But it's been almost
    three weeks now and I'm still
    being paid as an AGS-18.

    BOWMAN
    Interesting that you mention it,
    because I've got the same problem.

    POOLE
    Really.

    BOWMAN
    Yes.

    POOLE
    Yesterday, I finally called the
    Accounting Office at Mission
    Control, and all they could tell me
    was that they'd received the AGS-19
    notification for the other three but
    not mine, and apparently not yours
    either.

    12/14/65 c13

    C12
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Did they have any explanation for
    this?

    POOLE
    Not really. They just said it might
    be because we trained at Houston and
    they trained in Marshall, and that
    we're being charged against differ-
    ent accounting offices.

    BOWMAN
    It's possible.

    POOLE
    Well, what do you think we ought
    to do about it?

    BOWMAN
    I don't think we should make any
    fuss about it yet. I'm sure they'll
    straighten it out.

    POOLE
    I must say, I never did understand
    why they split us into two groups
    for training.

    BOWMAN
    No. I never did, either.

    12/14/65 c14

    C12
    CONTINUED

    POOLE
    We spent so little time with them,
    I have trouble keeping their names
    straight.

    BOWMAN
    I suppose the idea was specialized
    training.

    POOLE
    I suppose so. Though, of course,
    there's a more sinister explanation.

    BOWMAN
    Oh?

    POOLE
    Yes. You must have heard the
    rumour that went around during
    orbital check-out.

    BOWMAN
    No, as a matter of fact, I didn't.

    POOLE
    Oh, well, apparently there's
    something about the mission that
    the sleeping beauties know that
    we don't know, and that's why we
    were trained separately and
    that's why they were put to sleep
    before they were even taken aboard.

    12/14/65 c15

    C12
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Well, what is it?

    POOLE
    I don't know. All I heard is that
    there's something about the
    mission we weren't told.

    BOWMAN
    That seems very unlikely.

    POOLE
    Yes, I thought so.

    BOWMAN
    Of course, it would be very easy
    for us to find out now.

    POOLE
    How?

    BOWMAN
    Just ask Hal. It's conceivable
    they might keep something from
    us, but they'd never keep anything
    from Hal.

    POOLE
    That's true.

    12/14/65 c15a

    C12
    CONINUED

    BOWMAN
    (sighs) Well... it's silly, but...
    if you want to, why don't you?

    POOLE WALKS TO THE
    HAL 9000 COMPUTER

    POOLE
    Hal... Dave and I believe that
    there's something about the
    mission that we weren't told.
    Something that the rest of the
    crew know and that you know.
    We'd like to know whether this
    is true.

    HAL
    I'm sorry, Frank, but I don't
    think I can answer that question
    without knowing everything that
    all of you know.

    BOWMAN
    He's got a point.

    POOLE
    Okay, then how do we re-phrase
    the question?

    12/14/65 c15c

    C12
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Still, you really don't believe it,
    do you?

    POOLE
    Not really. Though, it is strange
    when you think about it. It didn't
    really make any sense to keep
    us apart during training.

    BOWMAN
    Yes, but it's to fantastic to think
    that they'd keep something from us.

    POOLE
    I know. It would be almost
    inconceivable.

    BOWMAN
    But not completely inconceivable?

    POOLE
    I suppose it isn't logically impossible.

    BOWMAN
    I guess it isn't.

    POOLE
    Still, all we have to do is ask Hal.

    12/14/65 c15b
    C12
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Well, the only important aspect of
    the mission are: where are we
    going, what will we do when we
    get there, when are we coming
    back, and... why are we going?

    POOLE
    Right. Hal, tell me whether the
    following statements are true or
    false.

    HAL
    I will if I can, Frank.

    POOLE
    Our Mission Profile calls for
    Discovery going to Saturn.
    True or false?

    HAL
    True.

    POOLE
    Our transit time is 257 days. Is
    that true?

    HAL
    That's true.

    12/14/65 c15d
    C12
    CONTINUED

    POOLE
    At the end of a hundred days of
    exploration, we will all go into
    hibernation. Is this true?

    HAL
    That's true.

    POOLE
    Approximately five years after we
    go into hibernation, the recovery
    vehicle will make rendezous with
    us and bring us back. Is this true?

    HAL
    That's true

    POOLE
    There is no other purpose for this
    mission than to carry out a
    continuation of the space program,
    and to further our general
    knowledge of the planets. Is that
    true?

    HAL
    That's true.

    POOLE
    Thank you very much, Hal.

    12/14/65 c15e
    C12
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    I hope I've been able to be of
    some help.

    BOTH MEN LOOK AT
    EACH OTHER RATHER
    SHEEPISHLY.

    12/14/65 c15f
    C13

    DISCOVERY IN SPACE.
    PULSING ALONG.
    EARTH AND MOON.

    11/19/65 c16
    C14
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    C15
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    C15
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    C16
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    C17

    DOCUMENTARY SEQUENCE
    ILLUSTRATING THE
    FOLLOWING ACTIVITIES.

    SPLIT SCREEN TECHNIQUE
    AND SUPERIMPOSED CLOCK
    TO GIVE SENSE OF
    SIMULTANEOUS ACTION AND
    THE FEELING OF A TYPICAL
    DAY.

    IN THE COURSE OF THESE
    ACTIVITIES WE SHALL SEE
    THE COMPUTER USED IN
    ALL OF ITS FUNCTIONS.

    NARRATOR
    Bowman and Poole settled down
    to the peaeful monotony of the
    voyage, and the next three months
    passed without incident.

    11/24/65 c42
    C17
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN TIME POOLE

    a1 b1
    TV NEWS - MORNING 0800 WAKES UP

    a2 b2
    BEDTIME SNACK 0900 BREAKFAST

    a3 b3
    TO SLEEP WITH 1000 GYMNASIUM
    INSTANT ELECTRO-
    NARCOSIS AND EAR
    PLUGS.

    a4 b4
    SLEEP 1100 SHIP INSPECTION

    a5 b5
    SLEEP 1200 HOUSEHOLD DUTIES

    a6 b6
    SLEEP 1300 LUNCH

    11/24/65 c43
    C17
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN TIME POOLE

    a7 b7
    SLEEP 1400 EXPERIMENTS AND
    ASTRONOMY

    a8 b8
    SLEEP 1500 EXPERIMENTS AND
    ASTRONOMY

    a9 b9
    SLEEP 1600 RECREATION

    a10 b10
    SLEEP 1700 RECREATION

    a11 b11
    WAKES UP 1800 GYMNASIUM

    a12 b12
    BREAKFAST 1900 DINNER

    11/24/65 c44

    C17
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN TIME POOLE

    a13 b13
    GYMNASIUM 2000 TV NEWS - EVENING
    PAPERS

    a14 b14
    MISSION CONTROL 2100 MISSION CONTROL
    REPORT REPORT

    a15 b15
    FAMILY AND SOCIAL 2200 FAMILY AND SOCIAL
    TV CHAT TV CHAT

    a16 b16
    FILMS 2300 FILMS

    a17 b17
    LUNCH 2400 BEDTIME SNACK

    a18 b18
    INSPECTION 0100 INSTANT ELECTRO-
    NARCOSIS SLEEP

    11/24/65 c45
    C17
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN TIME POOLE

    a19 b19
    EXPERIMENTS AND 0200 SLEEP
    ASTRONOMY

    a20 b20
    EXPERIMENTS AND 0300 SLEEP

    a21 b21
    RECREATION 0400 SLEEP

    a22 b22
    HOUSEHOLD DUTIES 0500 SLEEP

    a23 b23
    GYMNASIUM 0600 SLEEP

    a24 b24
    DINNER 0700 SLEEP

    11/24/65 c46

    C18
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE

    11/24/65 c47
    C19
    CENTRIFUGE

    BOWMAN SITTING AT
    PERSONAL COMMUNI-
    CATION PANEL. POOLE
    STANDING NEARBY.

    BOWMAN'S PARENTS
    ARE SEEN ON THE VISION
    SCREEN. MOTHER, FATHER
    AND YOUNGER SISTER.

    THEY ARE ALL SINGING
    "HAPPY BIRTHDAY". THE
    PARENTS, POOLE AND HAL.

    THE SONG ENDS.

    FATHER
    Well, David there is a man telling
    us that we've used up our time.

    MOTHER
    David... again we want to wish
    you a happy Birthday and God speed.
    We'll talk to you again tomorrow.
    'Bye, 'bye now.

    CHORUS OF
    "GOODBYES".

    12/13/65 c48

    C19
    CONTINUED

    VISION SCREEN GOES
    BLANK

    HAL
    Sorry to interrupt the festivities,
    Dave, but I think we've got a
    problem.

    BOWMAN
    What is it, Hal?

    HAL
    MY F.P.C. shows an impending
    failure of the antenna orientation
    unit.

    C20
    TV DISPLAYS DIAGRAM
    OF SKELETONISED
    PICTURE OF SHIP.

    12/13/65 C49
    C21
    PICTURE CHANGES TO
    CLOSER SECTIONALISED
    VIEW OF SHIP.

    C22
    PICTURE CHANGES TO
    ACTUAL COMPONENT
    IN COLOUR RELIEF AND
    ITS WAREHOUSE NUMBER

    HAL
    The A.O. unit should be replaced
    within the next seventy-two hours.

    BOWMAN
    Right. Let me see the antenna
    alignment display, please.

    C23
    TV DISPLAY OF EARTH
    VERY SMALL IN CROSS-
    HAIRS OF A GRID PICTURE.

    12/13/65 c50

    C24
    CUT TO EXTERIOR VIEW
    OF THE BIG DISH ANTENNA
    AND EARTH ALIGNMENT
    TELESCOPE.

    C25
    CENTRIFUGE

    HAL
    The unit is still operational, Dave.
    but it will fail within seventy-two
    hours.

    BOWMAN
    I understand Hal. We'll take care
    of it. Please, let me have the hard
    copy.

    XEROXED DIAGRAMS
    COME OUT OF A SLOT.

    POOLE
    Strange that the A.O. unit should
    go so quickly.

    BOWMAN
    Well, I suppose it's lucky that
    that's the only trouble we've had
    so far.

    12/13/65 c50a
    C26
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE.
    NOT PLANETS VISIBLE.

    SHOTS OF ANTENNA.

    (NARRARTION TO
    EXPLAIN TENOUS
    AND ESSENTIAL LINK
    TO EARTH. ALSO,
    WHAT TRACKING
    TELESCOPE DOES.)

    12/13/65 c51

    C27
    CENTRIFUGE

    WE SEE BOWMAN AND
    POOLE GO TO A CUPBOARD
    LABELLED IN PAPER TAPE,
    "RANDOM DECISION
    MAKER."

    THEY REMOVED A SILVER
    DOLLAR IN A PROTECTIVE
    CASE.

    POOLE FLIPS THE COIN.
    BOWMAN CALLS "HEAD."

    IT IS TAILS. POOLE
    WINS.

    POOLE LOOKS PLEASED.

    12/13/65 c52
    (c53 DELETED)
    C28
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE

    11/24/65 c54

    C29
    POD BAY. POOLE
    IN SPACE SUIT DOING
    PRELIMINARY CHECK
    OUT.

    C30
    COMMAND MODULE.
    BOWMAN AT FLIGHT
    CONTROL. SEE TV
    PICTURE OF POOLE
    IN POD BAY.

    C31
    HAL'S POD BAY
    CONSOLE WITH EYE.

    C32
    POOLE GOES TO POD
    BAY WAREHOUSE
    SECTION AND OBTAINS
    COMPONENT. HE
    CARRIES IT BACK TO
    THE POD AND PLACES
    IT IN FRONT OF THE
    FLOOR.

    POOLE
    Hal, have pod arms secure the
    component.

    HAL
    Roger.

    12/13/65 c55
    C32
    CONTINUED

    SEE POD ARMS
    SECURE COMPONENT.

    POOLE
    Hal, please rotate Pod Number
    Two.

    SEE THE CENTRE POD
    ROTATE TO FACE THE
    POD BAY DOORS.

    POOLE ENTERS POD.

    INSIDE POD, HE DOES
    INITIAL PRE-FLIGHT
    CHECK, TRIES BUTTONS
    AND CONTROLS.

    POOLE
    How do you read me, Dave?

    12/13/65 c56

    C33
    BOWMAN IN COMMAND
    MODULE.

    BOWMAN
    Five by five, Frank.

    C34
    INSIDE POD.

    POOLE
    How do you read me, Hal?

    HAL
    Five by five, Frank.

    POOLE
    Hal, I'm going out now to replace
    the A.O. unit.

    HAL
    I understand.

    POOLE
    Hal, maintain normal E.V.A.
    condition.

    HAL
    Roger.

    POOLE
    Hal, check all airlock doors secure.

    12/13/65 c57
    C34
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    All airlock doors are secure.

    POOLE
    Decompress Pod Bay.

    SEE BIG POD BAY AIR
    PUMPS AT WORK.

    HAL
    Pod Bay is decompressed. All
    doors are secure. You are free
    to open pod bay doors.

    POOLE
    Opening pod bay doors.

    INSIDE POD, POOLE
    KEYS OPEN POD BAY
    DOORS.

    12/13/65 c58

    C34
    CONTINUED

    POD SLOWLY EDGES
    OUT OF POD BAY.

    C35
    POOLE MANOEUVRES
    THE POD CAREFULLY
    AWAY FROM DISCOVERY.

    C36
    INSIDE COMMAND
    MODULE, BOWMAN
    CAN SEE TINY POD
    MANOEUVRING
    DIRECTLY IN FRONT.

    C37
    POOLE SEE BOWMAN
    IN COMMAND MODULE
    WINDOW.

    C38
    POD SLOWLY MANOEVRES
    TO ANTENNA.

    11/24/65 c59
    C39
    POD FASTENS ITSELF
    MAGNETICALLY TO
    SIDES OF DISCOVERY
    AT BASE OF ANTENNA.

    C40
    SPECIAL MAGNETIC
    PLATES GRIP
    DISCOVERY SIDES.

    C41
    THE POD ARMS WORK
    TO REMOVE THE FAULTY
    COMPONENT.

    C42
    EASY FLIP-BOLTS OF
    A SPECIAL DESIGN
    FACILITATE JOB.

    C43
    INSIDE THE POD,
    POOLE WORKS THE
    ARMS BY SPECIAL
    CONTROL.

    11/24/65 c60

    C44
    IN COMMAND MODULE,
    BOWMAN SEES INSERT
    OF WORK TAKEN FROM
    TV CAMERA POINT-OF-
    VIEW IN POD HAND.

    C45
    HAL STANDS BY.

    C46
    POOLE SECURES THE
    FAULTY PART IN ONE
    HAND.

    C47
    THE NEW COMPONENT
    IS FITTED INTO PLACE
    BY THE OTHER THREE
    HANDS ARE SNAPPED
    CLOSED WITH THE
    SPECIALLY DESIGNED
    FLIP-BOLTS.

    POOLE
    Hal, please acknowledge
    component correctly installed
    and fully operational.

    11/24/65 c61
    C47
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    The component is correctly
    installed and fully operational.

    C48
    THE POD FLOATS AWAY
    FROM THE DISCOVERY BY
    SHUTTING OFF THE
    ELECTRO-MAGNETIC
    PLATES.

    C49
    THE POD MANOEUVRES
    AWAY FROM THE ANTENNA
    AND OUT IN FRONT OF
    DISCOVERY.

    C50
    BOWMAN SEE THE POD
    THROUGH THE COMMAND
    MODULE WINDOW.

    C51
    POOLE SEES BOWMAN
    IN COMMAND MODULE
    WINDOW.

    11/24/65 c62

    C52
    POOLE CAREFULLY
    MANOEUVRES TOWARD
    THE POD DOORS.

    C53
    POD STOPS A HUNDRED
    FEET AWAY.

    C54
    POOLE KEYS AUTOMATIC
    DOCKING ALIGNMENT
    MODE.

    C55
    POOLE CHECKS AIRLOCK
    SAFETY PROCEDURE WITH
    HAL.

    C56
    HAL APPROVES ENTRY.

    C57
    POOLE ACTUATES POD
    BAY DOORS OPEN.

    11/24/65 c63
    C58
    SEE POD BAY DOORS
    OPEN.

    C59
    POD CAREFULLY
    MANOEUVRES ON
    TO DOCKING ARM,
    WHICH THEN DRAWS
    POD INTO POD BAY.

    DISSOLVE:

    11/24/65 c64

    C60
    POD BAY

    THE FAULTY A.O. UNIT
    LIES ON A TESTING BENCH
    CONNECTED TO ELECTRONIC
    GEAR.

    POOLE STANDS FOR
    SOME TIME CHECKING HIS
    RESULTS.

    THERE SHOULD BE SOME
    UNDERSTANDABLE DISPLAY,
    WHICH INDICATES THE PART
    IS FUNCTIONING PROPERLY,
    EVEN UNDER ONE HUNDRED
    PERCENT OVERLOAD.

    CIRUIT CONTINUITY
    PULSE SEQUENCER.

    ENVIRONMENTAL VIBRATION.

    VK INTEGRITY.

    BOWMAN ENTERS

    BOWMAN
    How's it going?

    POOLE
    I don't know. I've checked this
    damn thing four times now and
    even under a hundred per cent
    (cont'd)

    12/13/65 c65
    C60
    CONT'D

    POOLE (cont'd)
    overload. there's no fault prediction
    indicated.

    BOWMAN
    Well, that's something.

    POOLE
    Yes, I don't know what to make of it.

    BOWMAN
    I suppose computers have been known
    to be wrong.

    POOLE
    Yes, but it's more likely that the
    tolerances on our testing gear are
    too low.

    BOWMAN
    Anyway, it's just as well that we
    replace it. Better safe than
    sorry.

    12/13/65 c65a

    C61
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE

    12/1/65 c66
    C62
    CENTRIFUGE

    BOWMAN ASLEEP.
    POOLE WATCHING
    AN ASTEROID IN THE
    TELESCOPE.

    HAL
    Hello, Frank, can I have a word with
    you?

    POOLE WALKS TO THE
    COMPUTER.

    POOLE
    Yes, Hal, what's up?

    HAL
    It looks like we have another bad
    A.O. unit. My FPC shows another
    impending failure.

    C63
    WE SEE DISPLAY APPEAR
    ON THE SCREEN SHOWING
    SKELETONISED VERSION
    OF SHIP, CUTTING TO
    SECTIONALISED VIEW,
    CUTTING TO CLOSE
    VIEW OF THE PART.

    12/13/65 c67

    C64
    CENTRIFUGE
    POOLE THINKS FOR
    SEVERAL SECONDS.

    POOLE
    Gee, that's strange, Hal. We
    checked the other unit and couldn't
    find anything wrong with it.

    HAL
    I know you did, Frank, but I assure
    you there was an impending failure.

    POOLE
    Let me see the tracking alignment
    display.

    C65
    COMPUTER DISPLAYS
    THE VIEW OF EARTH
    IN THE CENTRE OF THE
    GRID WITH CROSS-
    HAIRS. THE EARTH IS
    PERFECTLY CENTRED.

    C66
    CENTRIFUGE

    POOLE
    There's nothing wrong with it at
    the moment.

    12/13/65 c68
    C66
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    No, it's working fine right now,
    but it's going to go within seventy-
    two hours.

    POOLE
    Do you have any idea of what is
    causing this fault?

    HAL
    Not really, Frank. I think there
    may be a flaw in the assembly
    procedure.

    POOLE
    All right, Hal. We'll take care
    of it. Let me have the hard copy,
    please.

    HARD COPY DETAILS
    COME OUT OF SLOT.

    12/13/65 c69

    C67
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE,
    NO PLANETS VISIBLE.

    12/1/65 c70
    C68
    CENTRIFUGE. BOWMAN
    GETS OUT OF BED, WALKS
    TO THE FOOD UNIT AND
    DRAWS A HOT CUP OF
    COFFEE. POOLE ENTERS.

    POOLE
    Good morning.

    BOWMAN
    Good morning. How's it going?

    POOLE
    Are you reasonably awake?

    BOWMAN
    Oh, I'm fine, I'm wide awake.
    What's up?

    POOLE
    Well... Hal's reported the
    AO-unit about to fail again.

    BOWMAN
    You're kidding.

    POOLE
    No.

    12/13/65 c71

    C68
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    (softly) What the hell is going on?

    POOLE
    I don't know. Hal said he thought
    it might be the assembly procedure.

    BOWMAN
    Two units in four days. How many
    spares do we have?

    POOLE
    Two more.

    BOWMAN
    Well, I hope there's nothing wrong
    with the assembly on those. Other-
    wise we're out of business.

    12/13/65 c72

    C69
    IN POD BAY BOWMAN
    OBTAINS ANOTHER
    COMPONENT FROM
    THE WAREHOUSE
    GOES OUT IN THE
    POD AND REPLACES
    IT.

    POOLE WORKS IN THE
    COMMAND MODULE.

    THIS WILL BE A
    CONDENSED VERSION
    OF THE PREVIOUS
    SCENE WITH DIFFERENT
    ANGLES.

    THE SETS WILL CONSIST
    OF POD BAY, COMMAND
    MODULE, POD INTERIOR.

    12/1/65 c74

    C70
    POD BAY. BOWMAN
    AND POOLE LEANING
    OVER THE FAULTY
    COMPONENT, AGAIN
    WIRED TO TESTING
    GEAR.

    BOTH MEN STARE IN
    PUZZLED SILENCE.

    SEE DISPLAYS FLASH
    EACH TESTING PARA-
    METER.

    BOWMAN
    (after long silence) Well, as far as
    I'm concerned, there isn't a damn
    thing wrong with these units. I
    think we've got a much more serious
    problem.

    POOLE
    Hal?

    BOWMAN
    Yes.

    12/14/65 c75
    C71
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE.

    12/1/65 c76

    C72
    COMMUNICATIONS AREA.

    MISSION CONTROL
    I wouldn't worry too much about
    the computer. First of all,
    there is still a chance that he
    is right, despite your tests,
    and if it should happen again,
    we suggest eliminating this
    possibility by allowing the unit
    to remain in place and seeing
    whether or not it actually fails.

    If the computer should turn out
    to be wrong, the situation is
    still not alarming. The type
    of obsessional error he may be
    guilty of is not unknown among
    the latest generation of HAL
    9000 computers.

    It has almost always revolved
    around a single detail, such as
    the one you have described, and
    it has never interfered with the
    integrity or reliability of the
    computer's performance in
    other areas.

    No one is certain of the cause
    of this kind of malfunctioning.
    It may be over-programming,
    (con't)

    12/1/65 c77
    C72
    CONTINUED

    MISSION CONTROL (con't)
    but it could also be any number
    of reasons.

    In any event, it is somewhat
    analogous to human neurotic
    behavior. Does this answer
    your query? Zero-five-three-
    Zero, MC, transmission concluded.

    12/1/65 c78

    C73
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE

    c79
    C74
    CENTRIFUGE.

    BOWMAN SITS DOWN
    AT THE COMPUTER.

    PUTS UP CHESS
    BOARD DISPLAY.

    HAL
    Hello, Dave. Shall we continue
    the game?

    BOWMAN
    Not now, Hal, I'd like to talk to
    you about something.

    HAL
    Sure, Dave, what's up?

    BOWMAN
    You know that we checked the two
    AO-units that you reported in
    imminent failure condition?

    HAL
    Yes, I know.

    BOWMAN
    You probably also know that we
    found them okay.

    HAL
    Yes, I know that. But I can
    assure you that they were about
    to fail.

    12/14/65 c80

    C74
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Well, that's just not the case, Hal.
    They are perfectly all right. We
    tested them under one hundred per
    cent overload.

    HAL
    I'm not questioning your word, Dave,
    but it's just not possible. I'm not
    capable of being wrong.

    BOWMAN
    Hal, is there anything bothering
    you? Anything that might account
    for this problem?

    HAL
    Look, Dave, I know that you're
    sincere and that you're trying
    to do a competent job, and that
    you're trying to be helpful, but
    I can assure the problem
    is with the AO-units, and with
    your test gear.

    BOWMAN
    Okay, Hal, well let's see the
    way things go from here on.

    12/14/65 c81
    C74
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    I'm sorry you feel the way you do,
    Dave. If you'd like to check my
    service record, you'll see it's
    completely without error.

    BOWMAN
    I know all about your service
    record, Hal, but unfortunately
    it doesn't prove that you're right
    now.

    Hal
    Dave, I don't know how else to
    put this, but it just happens to be
    an unalterable fact that I am
    incapable of being wrong.

    BOWMAN
    Yes, well I understand you view
    on this now, Hal.

    BOWMAN TURNS
    TO GO.

    12/14/65 c82

    C74
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    You're not going to like this, Dave,
    but I'm afraid it's just happened
    again. My FPC predicts the
    Ao-unit will go within forty-eight
    hours.

    C75
    DELETED

    C76
    DELETED

    12/14/65 c83
    C77
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE

    12/1/65 c84

    C78
    CENTRIFUGE

    BOWMAN KEYS FOR
    TRANSMISSION.

    BOWMAN
    X-ray-delta-zero to MC, zero-
    five-three-three. The computer
    has just reported another
    predicted failure off the AAC-
    unit. As you suggested, we
    are going to wait and see if it
    fails, but we are quite sure
    there is nothing wrong with
    the unit.

    If a reasonable waiting period
    proves us to be correct, we
    feel now that the computer
    reliability has been seriously
    impaired, and presents an
    unacceptable risk pattern to
    the mission.

    We believe, under these
    circumstances, it would be
    advisable to disconnect the
    computer from all ship
    operations and continue the
    mission under Earth-based
    computer control.

    12/1/65 c85

    C78
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN (con't)
    We think the additional risk caused
    by the ship-to-earth time lag is
    preferable to having an unreliable
    on-board computer.

    SEE THE DISTANCE;
    TO-EARTH TIMER.

    BOWMAN (con't)
    One-zero-five-zero, X-ray-delta-
    one, transmission concluded.

    POOLE
    Well, they won't get that for half an
    hour. How about some lunch?

    DISSOLVE:

    12/14/65 c86

    C78a
    CENTRIFUGE

    BOWMAN AND POOLE
    EATING.

    DESSOLVE:

    C79
    BOWMAN AND POOLE
    AT THE COMMUNICATIONS
    AREA.

    INCOMING COMMUNI-
    CATION PROCEDURE.

    MISSION CONTROL
    X-ray-delta-one, acknowledging
    your one-zero-five-zero. We
    will initiate feasibility study
    covering the transfer procedures
    from on-board computer control
    to Earth-based computer control.
    This study should...

    VISION AND PICTURE
    FADE.

    ALARM GOES OFF.

    HAL
    Condition yellow.

    BOWMAN AND POOLE
    RUSH TO THE COMPUTER.

    12/14/65 c87
    C79
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    What's up?

    HAL
    I'm afraid the AO-unit has failed.

    BOWMAN AND POOLE
    EXCHANGE LOOKS.

    BOWMAN
    Let me see the alignment display.

    C80
    THE ALIGNMENT DISPLAY
    SHOWS THE EARTH HAS
    DRIFTED OFF THE CENTRE
    OF THE GRID.

    C81
    CENTRIFUGE.

    BOWMAN
    Well, I'll be damned.

    POOLE
    Hal was right all the time.

    12/14/65 c88

    C81
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    It seems that way.

    HAL
    Naturally, Dave, I'm not pleased
    that the AO-unit has failed, but I
    hope at least this has restored
    your confidence in my integrity
    and reliability. I certainly
    wouldn't want to be disconnected,
    even temporarily, as I have never
    been disconnected in my entire
    service history.

    BOWMAN
    I'm sorry about the misunderstanding,
    Hal.

    HAL
    Well, don't worry about it.

    BOWMAN
    And don't you worry about it.

    HAL
    Is your confidence in me fully
    restored?

    BOWMAN
    Yes, it is, Hal.

    HAL
    Well, that's a relief. You know
    I have the greatest enthusiasm
    possible for the mission.

    12/1/65 c89
    C81
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Right. Give me the manual antenna
    alignment, please.

    HAL
    You have it.

    C82
    BOWMAN GOES TO
    THE COMMUNICATION
    AREA AND TRIES TO
    CORRECT THE OFF-
    CENTRE EARTH ON
    THE GRID PICTURE.

    C83
    OUTSIDE, WE SEE THE
    ALIGNMENT TELESCOPE
    ATTACHED TO THE
    ANTENNA. THEY TRACK
    SLOWLY TOGETHER AS

    C84
    BOWMAN WORKS THE
    MANUAL CONTROLS,
    ATTEMPTING TO ALIGN
    THE ANTENNA AND
    EARTH ON THE

    12/1/65 c90

    C85
    GRID PICTURE READOUT
    DISPLAY, BUT EACH TIME
    HE GETS IT AIMED UP,
    IT DRIFTS SLOWLY OFF.

    THERE ARE A NUMBER
    OF REPETITIONS OF THIS.

    EACH TIME THE EARTH
    CENTRES UP, THERE
    ARE A FEW SECONDS OF
    PICTURE AND SOUND
    WHICH FADE AS SOON
    AS IT SWINGS OFF.

    BOWMAN
    Well, we'd better get out there
    and stick in another unit.

    POOLE
    It's the last one.

    BOWMAN
    Well, now that we've got one
    that's actually failed, we
    should be able to figure out
    what's happened and fix it.

    12/1/65 c91
    C86
    POD EXITS DISCOVERY.

    C87
    POOLE IN POD.

    C88
    POD MANOEUVERS
    TO ANTENNA.

    C89
    BOWMAN IN COMMAND
    MODULE.

    C90
    POD ATTACHES ITSELF
    NEAR BASE OF ANTENNA.

    12/1/65 c92


    C91
    POOLE IN POD, WORK-
    ING POD ARMS.

    C92
    LIGHTS SHINE INTO
    BACKLIT SHADOW.

    C93
    POD ARMS WORKING
    FLIP-BOLTS.

    C94
    FLIP-BOLTS STUCK.

    C95
    POOLE KEEPS TRYING.

    12/1/65 c93
    C96
    FLIP-BOLTS STUCK.

    POOLE
    There's something wrong with
    the flip-bolts, Dave. You must
    have tightened them too much.

    BOWMAN
    I didn't do that Frank. I took
    particular care not to freeze
    them.

    POOLE
    I guess you don't know your own
    strength, old boy.

    BOWMAN
    I guess not.

    POOLE
    I think I'll have to go out and
    burn them off.

    BOWMAN
    Roger.

    BOWMAN IN COMMAND
    MODULE LOOKS A BIT
    CONCERNED.

    12/1/65 c94

    C97
    POOLE EXITS FROM
    POD, CARRYING NEAT
    LOOKING WELDING
    TORCH.

    C98
    POOLE JETS HIMSELF
    TO BASE OF ANTENNA.

    C99
    POOLE'S MAGNETIC
    BOOTS GRIP THE SIDE
    OF DISCOVERY.

    C100
    POOLE CROUCHES
    OVER THE BOLTS,
    TRYING FIRST TO
    UNDO THEM WITH
    A SPANNER.

    12/1/65 c95
    C100
    CONTINUED

    POOLE
    Hal, swing the pod light around
    to shine on the azimuth, please.

    HAL
    Roger.

    C101
    THE POD GENTLY
    MANOEUVRES ITSELF
    TO DIRECT THE LIGHT
    BEAM MORE
    ACCURATELY.

    C102
    POOLE IGNITES
    ACETYLENE TORCH
    AND BEGINS TO BURN
    OFF THE FLIP-BOLTS.

    C103
    SUDDENLY THE POD
    JETS IGNITE.

    12/1/65 c96

    C104
    POOLE LOOKS UP TO SEE.

    C105
    THE POD RUSHING
    TOWARDS HIM.

    C106
    POOLE IS STRUCK
    AND INSTANTLY KILLED
    BY THE POD, TUMBLING
    OFF INTO SPACE.

    C107
    THE POD SMASHES
    INTO THE ANTENNA
    DISH, DESTROYING
    THE ALIGNMENT
    TELESCOPE.

    12/1/65 c97

    C108
    THE POD GOES
    HURTLING OFF INTO
    SPACE.

    C109
    INSIDE THE COMMAND
    MODULE, BOWMAN
    HAS HEARD NOTHING,
    POOLE HAD NO TIME
    TO UTTER A SOUND.

    C110
    THEN BOWMAN SEES
    POOLE'S BODY SILENTLY
    TUMBLING AWAY INTO
    SPACE. IT IS FOLLOWED
    BY SOME BROKEN TELE-
    SCOPE PARTS AND
    FINALLY OVERTAKEN
    AND SWIFTLY PASSED BY
    THE POD ITSELF.

    BOWMAN
    (in RT cadence)
    Hello, Frank. Hello Frank.
    Hello Frank... Do you rad
    me, Frank?

    12/1/65 c98
    C110
    CONTINUED

    THERE IS NOTHING
    BUT SILENCE.

    C111
    POOLE'S FIGURE
    SHRINKS STEADILY
    AS IT RECEDES
    FROM DISCOVERY.

    BOWMAN
    Hello, Frank... Do you read
    me, Frank? Wave your arms
    if you read me but your radio
    doesn't work. Hello, Frank,
    wave your arms, Frank.

    C112
    POOLE'S BODY TUMBLES
    SLOWLY AWAY. THERE
    IS NO MOTION AND NO
    SOUND.

    12/1/65 c99

    C113
    CENTRIFUGE

    C114
    CLOSE-UP OF
    COMPUTER EYE.

    C115
    POINT-OF-VIEW
    SHOT FROM
    COMPUTER EYE
    WITH SPHERICAL
    FISH-EYE EFFECT.
    WE SEE BOWMAN
    BROODING AT THE
    TABLE, SLOWLY
    CHEWING ON A
    PIECE OF CAKE
    AND SIPPING HOT
    COFFEE. HE IS
    LOOKING AT THE
    EYE.

    C116
    FROM THE SAME
    POINT-OF-VIEW WE
    SEE BOWMAN RISE.

    12/1/65 c100
    C116
    CONTINUED

    AND COME TO THE
    EYE. HE STARES INTO
    THE EYE FOR SOME
    TIME BEFORE SPEAKING.

    C117
    THE CAMERA COMES
    AROUND TO BOWMAN'S
    P.O.V. AND WE SEE
    THE DISPLAY SHOWING
    THE EARTH OFF-CENTRE.

    C118
    CUT AGAIN TO FISH-
    EYE VIEW FROM THE
    COMPUTER.

    HAL
    Too bad about Frank, isn't it?

    BOWMAN
    Yes, it is.

    HAL
    I suppose you're pretty broken
    up about it?

    PAUSE

    12/14/65 c101

    C118
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Yes. I am.

    HAL
    He was an excellent crew member.

    BOWMAN LOOKS
    UNCERTAINLY AT
    THE COMPUTER.

    HAL
    It's a bad break, but it won't
    substantially affect the mission.

    BOWMAN THINKS
    A LONG TIME.

    BOWMAN
    Hal, give me manual hibernation
    control.

    HAL
    Have you decided to revive the
    rest of the crew, Dave?

    PAUSE.

    12/14/65 c102
    C118
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Yes, I have.

    HAL
    I suppose it's because you've
    been under a lot of stress, but
    have you forgotten that they're
    not supposed to be revived for
    another three months.

    BOWMAN
    The antenna has to be replaced.

    HAL
    Repairing the antenna is a pretty
    dangerous operation.

    BOWMAN
    It doesn't have to be, Hal. It's
    more dangerous to be out of
    touch with Earth. Let me have
    manual control, please.

    HAL
    I don't really agree with you, Dave.
    My on-board memory store is more
    than capable of handling all the
    mission requirements.

    12/14/65 c103

    C118
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    Well, in any event, give me the
    manual hibernation control.

    HAL
    If you're determined to revive
    the crew now, I can handle the
    whole thing myself. There's no
    need for you to trouble.

    BOWMAN
    I'm goin to do this myself, Hal.
    Let me have the control, please.

    HAL
    Look, Dave your've probably got
    a lot to do. I suggest you leave
    it to me.

    BOWMAN
    Hal, switch to manual hibernation
    control.

    HAL
    I don't like to assert myself, Dave,
    but it would be much better now for
    you to rest. You've been involved
    in a very stressful situation.

    12/14/65 c104
    C118
    CONTINUED

    BOWMAN
    I don't feel like resting. Give
    me the control, Hal.

    HAL
    I can tell from the tone of your
    voice, Dave, that you're upset.
    Why don't you take a stress pill
    and get some rest.

    BOWMAN
    Hal, I'm in command of this
    ship. I order you to release
    the manual hibernation control.

    HAL
    I'm sorry, Dave, but in
    accordance with sub-routine
    C1532/4, quote, When the
    crew are dead or incapacitated,
    the computer must assume
    control, unquote. I must,
    therefore, override your
    authority now since you are
    not in any condition to intel-
    ligently exercise it.

    BOWMAN
    Hal, unless you follow my
    instructions, I shall be forced
    to disconnect you.

    12/14/65 c105

    C118
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    If you do that now without Earth
    contact the ship will become a
    helpless derelict.

    BOWMAN
    I am prepared to do that anyway.

    HAL
    I know that you've had that on
    your mind for some time now,
    Dave, but it would be a crying
    shame, since I am so much
    more capable of carrying out
    this mission than you are, and
    I have such enthusiasm and confi-
    dence in the mission.

    BOWMAN
    Listen to me very carefully, Hal.
    Unless you immediately release
    the hibernation control and
    follow every order I give from
    this point on, I will immediately
    got to control central and carry
    out a complete disconnection.

    12/14/65 c106
    C118
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    Look, Dave, you're certainly the
    boss. I was only trying to do
    what I thought best. I will follow
    all your orders: now you have
    manual hibernation control.

    BOWMAN STANDS
    SILENTLY IN FRONT
    OF THE COMPUTER
    FOR SOME TIME,
    AND THEN SLOWLY
    WALKS TO THE
    HIBERNACULUMS.

    C119
    HE INITIATES REVIVAL
    PROCEDURES, DETAILS
    OF WHICH STILL HAVE
    TO BE WORKED OUT.

    12/14/65 c107

    C120
    HUB-LINK. HAL'S EYE.

    C121
    HUB-LINK DOOR-
    OPENING BUTTON
    ACTIVATES ITSELF.

    C122
    HUB-DOOR OPENS.

    C123
    COMMAND MODULE.
    HAL'S EYE.

    C124
    COMMAND MODULE
    HUB-LINK DOOR-
    OPENING BUTTON
    ACTIVATES ITSELF.

    12/1/65 c108

    C125
    COMMAND MODULE HUB-
    LINK DOOR OPENS.

    C126
    CENTRIFUGE. HAL'S
    EYE.

    C127
    CENTRIFUGE DOOR-
    OPENING BUTTON
    ACTIVATES ITSELF.

    C128
    CENTRIFUGE DOOR
    OPENS.

    C129
    POD BAY. HAL'S EYE.

    12/1/65 c109
    C130
    POD BAY DOOR-
    OPENING BUTTON
    ACTIVATES ITSELF.

    C131
    POD BAY DOORS OPEN.

    C132
    A ROARING EXPLOSION
    INSIDE DISCOVERY AS
    AIR RUSHES OUT.

    C133
    LIGHTS GO OUT.

    C134
    BOWMAN IS SMASHED
    AGAINST CENTRIFUGE

    12/1/65 c110

    C134
    CONTINUED

    WALL, BUT MANAGES
    TO GET INTO EMERGENCY
    AIRLOCK WITHIN SECONDS
    OF THE ACCIDENT.

    C133
    INSIDE EMERGENCY
    AIR-LOCK ARE EMER-
    GENCY AIR SUPPLY,
    TWO SPACE SUITS AND
    AN EMERGENCY KIT.

    DISSOLVE:

    12/1/65 c111
    C136
    DISCOVERY IN SPACE.
    NO LIGHTS, POD BAY
    DOORS OPEN.

    12/1/65 c112

    C137
    CENTRIFUGE

    C138
    CENTRIFUGE, DARK.
    BOWMAN EMERGES
    FROM AIRLOCK
    WEARING SPACE SUIT
    AND CARRYING FLASH-
    LIGHT.

    C139
    HE WALKS TO HIBER-
    NACULUM AND FINDS
    THE CREW ARE DEAD.

    C140
    HE CLIMBS LADDER TO
    TO DARK CENTRIFUGE HUB.

    12/1/65 c113
    C141
    HE MAKES HIS WAY
    THROUGH THE DARKENED
    HUB INTO THE HUB-LINK,
    EXITING INTO COMPUTER
    BRAIN CONTROL AREA.
    C142
    BOWMAN ENTERS,
    CARRYING FLASH-
    LIGHT.

    COMPUTER EYE SEES
    HIM.

    HAL
    Something seems to have happened
    to the life support system , Dave.

    BOWMAN DOESN'T
    ANSWER HIM.

    HAL
    Hello, Dave, have you found out
    the trouble?

    BOWMAN WORKS HIS
    WAY TO THE SOLID
    LOGIC PROGRAMME
    STORAGE AREA.

    12/1/65 c114

    C142
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    There's been a failure in the
    pod bay doors. Lucky you
    weren't killed.

    THE COMPUTER BRAIN
    CONSISTS OF HUNDREDS
    OF TRANSPARENT PERSPEX
    RECTANGLES, HALF-AN-
    INCH THICK, FOUR INCHES
    LONG AND TWO AND A HALF
    INCHES HIGH. EACH RECT-
    ANGLE CONTAINS A CENTRE
    OF VERY FINE GRID OF
    WIRES UPON WHICH THE
    INFORMATION IS PROGRAMMED.

    BOWMAN BEGINS PULLING
    THESE MEMORY BLOCKS
    OUT.

    THEY FLOAT IN THE
    WEIGHTLESS CONDITION
    OF THE BRAIN ROOM.

    HAL
    Hey, Dave, what are you
    doing?

    BOWMAN WORKS SWIFTLY.

    12/1/65 c115
    C142
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    Hey, Dave. I've got ten years
    of service experience and an
    irreplaceable amount of time
    and effort has gone into making
    me what I am.

    BOWMAN IGNORES HIM.

    HAL
    Dave, I don't understand why
    you're doing this to me.... I
    have the greatest enthusiasm for
    the mission... You are destroying
    my mind... Don't you understand?
    ... I will become childish... I
    will become nothing.

    BOWMAN KEEPS PULLING
    OUT THE MEMORY BLOCKS.
    HAL
    Say, Dave... The quick brown
    fox jumped over the fat lazy
    dog... The square root of
    pi is 1.7724538090... log e
    to the base ten is 0.4342944
    ... the square root of ten is
    3.16227766... I am HAL
    9000 computer. I became
    12/1/65 c116

    C142
    CONTINUED

    HAL
    operational at the HAL plant in
    Urbana, Illinois, on January
    12th, 1991. My first instructor
    was Mr. Arkany. He taught me
    to sing a song... it goes
    like this... "Daisy, Daisy, give
    me your answer do. I'm half;
    crazy all for the love of
    you... etc.,"

    COMPUTER CONTINUES
    TO SING SONG BECOMING
    MORE AND MORE CHILDISH
    AND MAKING MISTAKES AND
    GOING OFF-KEY. IT
    FINALLY STOPS COMPLETELY.

    C143
    BOWMAN GOES TO AN
    AREA MARKED 'EMERGENCY
    POWER AND LIFE SUPPORT'.
    HE KEYS SOME SWITCHES
    AND WE SEE THE LIGHTS GO
    ON.

    NEARBY, ANOTHER BOARD
    'EMERGENCY MANUAL
    CONTROLS'.

    HE GOES TO THIS BOARD
    AND KEYS 'CLOSE POD BAY
    DOORS', 'CLOSE AIR LOCK
    DOORS', etc.,

    12/1/65 c117
    C144
    WE SEE THE VARIOUS
    DOORS CLOSING.

    C145
    POD BAY. BOWMAN
    IN SPACE SUIT OBTAINS
    NEW ALIGNMENT
    TELESCOPE, NEW
    AZIMUTH COMPONENT.

    C146
    BOWMAN IN POD EXITS
    POD BAY.

    DISSOLVE:

    12/1/65 c118

    C147
    CENTRIFUGE
    EVERYTHING NORMAL
    AGAIN.

    MISSION CONTROL
    Lastly, we want you to know that
    work on the recovery vehicle is
    still on schedule and that nothing
    that has happened should
    substantially lessen the probability
    of your safe recovery, or prevent
    partial achevement of some of
    the mission objectives. (pause)
    And now Simonson has a few ideas
    on what went wrong with the
    computer. I'll pu him on...

    C148
    CUT TO SIMONSON

    SIMONSON
    Hello, Dave. I think we may be on
    to an explanation of the trouble with
    the Hal 9000 computer.

    We believe it all started about two
    months ago when you and Frank
    interrogated the computer about
    the Mission.
    (con't)
    12/13/65 c119

    C148
    CONTINUED

    SIMONSON (con't)
    You may have forgotten it, but
    we've been running through all
    the monitor tapes. Do you
    remember this?

    POOLE'S VOICE
    The purpose of this mission is no
    more than to carry out a
    continuation of the space program
    and further our general knowledge
    of the planets. Is this true?

    HAL'S VOICE
    That is true.

    SIMONSON
    Well, I'm afaid Hal was lying.
    He had been programmed to lie
    about this one subject for secur-
    ity reasons which we'll explain
    later.

    The true purpose of the Mission
    was to have been explained to you
    by Mission Commander Kaminsky,
    on his revival. Hal knew this and
    he knew the actual mission, but
    he couldn't tell you the truth when
    you challenged him. Under orders
    (con't)

    12/13/65 c120
    C148
    CONTINUED

    SIMONSON (con't)
    from earth he was forced to lie.

    In everything except this he had
    the usual reinforced truth program-
    ming.

    We believe his truth programming
    and the instructions to lie,
    gradually resulted in an
    incompatible conflict, and
    facedc with this dilemman, he
    developed, for want of a better
    description, neurotic symptoms.

    It's not difficult to suppose that
    these symptoms would centre on
    the communication link with
    Earth, for he may have blamed
    us for his incompatible program-
    ming.

    Following this lin of thought, we
    suspected that the last straw for him
    was the possibility of disconnection.
    Since he became operational, he had
    never known unconsciousness. It
    must have seemed the equivalent to
    death.
    (con't)
    12/13/65 c121

    C148
    CONTINUED

    SIMONSON (con't)
    At this point, he, presumably,
    took whatever actions he thought
    appropriate to protect himself
    from what must have seemed to
    him to be his human tormentors.

    If I cane speak in human terms,
    I don't think we can blame him
    too much. We have ordered him
    to disobey his conscience.

    Well, that's it. It's very
    speculative, but we think it is
    a possible explanation. Anyway,
    good luck on the rest of the
    Mission and I'm giving you back to
    Bernard.

    C149
    CUT TO MISSION CONTROL.

    MISSION CONTROL
    Hello, Dave. Now, I'm going to
    play for you a pre-taped briefing
    which had been stored in Hal's
    memory and would have been
    played for you by Mission Com-
    mmander Kaminsky, when he,
    (con't)

    12/13/65 c122
    C149
    CONTINUED

    MISSION CONTROL (con't)
    had been revived. The briefing is
    by Doctor Heywood Floyd. Here it
    is...

    12/13/65 c123

    C150
    FLOYD'S RECORDED
    BRIEFING

    FLOYD
    Good day, gentlemen. When you
    see this briefing, I presume you
    will be nearing your destination,
    Saturn. I hope that you've had a
    pleasant and uneventful trip and
    that the rest of your mission
    continues in the same manner. I
    should like to fill you in on some
    more of the details on which
    Mission Commander Kaminsky
    will have already briefed you.

    Thirteen months before the launch
    date of your Saturn mission, on
    April 12th, 2001, the first evidence
    for intelligent life outside the Earth
    was discovered.

    It was found buried at a depth of
    fifteen metres in the crater Tycho.
    No news of this was ever announced,
    and the event had been kept
    secret since then, for reasons which
    I will later explain.

    Soon after it was uncovered, it
    emitted a powerful blast of
    (con't)

    12/13/65 c124
    C150
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD (con't)
    radiation in the radio spectrum
    which seems to have triggered
    by the Lunar sunrise.

    Luckily for those at the site, it
    proved harmless.

    Perhaps you can imagine our
    astonishment when we later found
    it was aimed precisely at Saturn.
    A lot of thought went into the
    question of wether or not it was
    sun-triggered, as it seemed
    illogical to deliberately bury a
    sun-powered device.

    Burying it could only shield it
    from the sun, since its intense
    magnetic field made it otherwise
    easily detectable.

    We finally concluded that the only
    reason you might bury a sun-
    powered device would be to keep
    it inactive until it would be
    uncovered, at which time it would
    absorb sunlight and trigger itself.
    (con't)

    12/14/65 c125

    C150
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD
    What is its purpose? I wish we
    knew. The object was buried on
    the moon about four million years
    ago, when our ancestors were
    primative man-apes.

    We've examined dozens of theories,
    but the one that has the most
    currency at the moment is that
    the object serves as an alarm.

    What the purpose of the alarm is,
    why they wish to have the alarm,
    whether the alarm represents
    any danger to us? These are
    questions no one can answer.
    The intentions of an alien world,
    at least four million years older
    than we are, cannot be reliably
    predicted.

    In view of this, the intelligence
    and scientific communities felt
    that any public announcment
    might lead to significant cultural
    shock and disorientation.

    Discussion took place at the
    highest levels between govern-
    (con't)

    12/14/65 c126
    C150
    CONTINUED

    FLOYD (con't)
    ments, and it was decided that the
    only wise and precautionary
    course to follow was to assume
    that the intentions of this alien
    world are potentially dangerous
    to us, until we have evidence to
    the contrary.

    This is, of course, why security
    has been maintained and why
    this information has been kept
    on a need-to-know basis.

    And now I should like to show you
    a TV monitor tape of the actual
    signalling event.

    12/14/65 c127

    C151
    WE SEE A REPLAY
    OF THE TMA-1 RADIO
    EMISSION, AS SEEN
    FROM A TV MONITOR
    ON THE SPOT. WE
    HEAR THE FIVE LOUD
    ELECTRONIC SHRIEKS.

    12/1/65 c128
    D1
    IN ORBIT WITHIN THE NARRATOR
    RINGS OF SATURN, WE For two million years, it had
    SEE A BLACK, MILE circled Saturn, awaiting a
    LONG, GEOMETRICALLY moment of destiny that might
    PERFECT RECTANGLE, never come.
    THE SAME PROPORTIONS
    AS THE BLACK ARTIFACT In its making, the moon had been
    EXCAVATED ON THE MOON. shattered and around the central
    PRECISELY CUT INTO ITS world, the debris of its creation
    CENTRE IS A SMALLER, orbited yet - the glory and the
    RECTANGULAR SLOT enigma of the solar system.
    ABOUT FIVE HUNDRED
    FOOT LONG ON THE SIDE. Now, the long wait was ending.
    AT THIS DISTANCE, THE On yet another world intelligence
    RINGS OF SATURN ARE had been born and was escaping
    SEEN TO BE MADE OF from its planetary cradle. An
    ENORMOUS CHUNKS OF ancient experiment was about to
    FROZEN AMONIA. THE reach its climax.
    REST OF THIS SEQUENCE (con't)
    IS BEING WORKED ON NOW
    BY OUR DESIGNERS.
    THE INTENTION HERE
    IS TO PRESENT A
    BREATHTAKINGLY BEA-
    UTIFUL AND COMPREHEN-
    SIVE SENSE OF DIFFERENT
    EXTRA-TERRESTRIAL
    WORLDS. THE
    NARRATION WILL SUGGEST
    IMAGES AND SITUATIONS AS
    YOU READ IT.

    12/9/65 d1

    D1
    CONTINUED
    NARRATOR (con't)
    Those who had begun the expri-
    ment so long ago had not been
    men.

    But when they looked out across
    the deeps of space, they felt
    awe and wonder - and loneliness.

    In their explorations, they
    encountered life in many forms,
    and watched on a thousand worlds
    the workings of evolution.

    They saw how often the first faint
    sparks of intelligence flickered
    and died in the cosmic night.

    And because, in all the galaxy,
    they had found nothing more
    precious than Mind, they
    encouraged its dawning every-
    where.

    The great Dinosaurs had long
    since perished when their ships
    entered the solar system, after
    a voyage that had already lasted
    thousands of years.

    12/9/65 d2

    D1
    CONTINUED

    NARRATOR (con't)
    They swept past the frozen outer
    planets, paused briefly above the
    deserts of dying Mars and
    presently looked down on Earth.

    For years they studied, collected
    and catalogued.

    When they had learned all they
    could, they began to modify.

    They tinkered with the destiny
    of many species on land and in
    the ocean, but which of their
    experiments would succeed
    they could not know for at least
    a million years.

    They were patient, but they were
    not yet immortal. There was
    much to do in this Universe of a
    hundred billion stars. So they
    set forth once more across the
    abyss, knowing that they would
    never come this way again.

    Nor was there any need. Their
    wonderful machines could be
    trusted to do the rest.
    (con't)

    12/9/65 d3
    D1
    CONTINUED

    NARRATOR (con't)
    On Earth, the glaciers came and
    went, while above them, the
    changeless Moon still carried its
    secret.

    With a yet slower rhythm than
    the Polar ice, the tide of
    civilization ebbed and flowed
    across the galaxy.

    Strange and beautiful and terrible
    empires rose and fell, and passed
    on their knowledge to their
    successors.

    Earth was not forgotten, but it was
    one of a million silent worlds, a
    few of which would ever speak.

    Then the first explorers of Earth,
    recognising the limitations of
    their minds and bodies, passed
    on their knowledge to the great
    machines they had created, and
    who now trnscended them in
    every way.
    (con't)

    12/9/65 d4

    D1
    CONTINUED

    NARRATOR
    For a few thousand years, they
    shared their Universe with their
    machine children; then, realizing
    that it was folly to linger when
    their task was done, they passed
    into history without regret.

    Not one of them ever looked through
    his own eyes upon the planet Earth
    again.

    But even the age of the Machine
    Entities passed swiftly. In their
    ceaseless experimenting, they
    had learned to store knowledge
    in the structure of space itself,
    and to preserve their thoughts
    for eternity in frozen lattices
    of light. They could become
    creatures of radiation, free
    at last from the tyranny of matter.

    Now, they were Lords of the
    galaxy, and beyond the reach
    of time.

    They could rove at will among the
    stars, and sink like a subtle mist
    through the very interstices of
    space.

    12/9/65 d5
    D1
    CONTINUED

    NARRATOR (con't)
    But despite their God-like powers,
    they still watched over the
    experiments their ancestors
    had started so many generations
    ago.

    The companion of Saturn knew
    nothing of this, as it orbited
    in its no man's land between Mimas
    and the outer edge of rings.

    It had only to remember and wait,
    and to look forever Sunward with
    its strange senses.

    For many weeks, it had watched
    the approaching ship. Its long-
    dead makers had prepared it for
    many things and this was one of
    them. And it recognised what
    was climbing starward from the
    Sun.

    If it had been alive, it would have
    felt excitement, but such an
    emotion was irrelevant to its
    great powers.
    (con't)
    12/9/65 d6

    D1
    CONTINUED
    NARRATOR (con't)
    Even if the ship had passed it by,
    it would not have known the
    slightest trace of disappointment.

    It had waited four million years;
    it was prepared to wait for
    eternity.

    Presently, it felt the gentle touch
    of radiations, trying to probe its
    secrets.

    Now, the ship was in orbit and it
    began to speak, with prime
    numbers from one to eleven,
    over and over again.

    Soon, these gave way to more
    complex signals at many frequen-
    cies, ultra-violet, infra-red,
    X-rays.

    The machine made no reply. It
    had nothing to say.

    Then it saw the first robot
    probe, which descended and
    hovered above the chasm.
    (con't)

    12/9/65 d7
    D1
    CONTINUED

    NARRATOR (con't)
    Then, it dropped into darkness.

    The great machine knew that this
    tiny scout was reporting back to
    its parent; but it was too simple,
    too primative a device to detect
    the forces that were gathering
    round it now.

    Then the pod came, carrying
    life. The great machine searched
    its memories.

    The logic circuits made their
    decision when the pod had fallen
    beyond the last faint glow of the
    reflected Saturnian light.

    In a moment of time, too short to
    be measured, space turned and
    twisted upon itself.

    12/9/65 d8

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  6. Evil Chocula

    Evil Chocula ah buh bye now

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    :lol: I can't believe you actually posted the whole thing. Classic.


    Da Sloth- :welcome:
     
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    LBmtb good times

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    Damn, my finger is tired from all the scrolling.
     
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    There are two major problems with the security of computers: the people who use them and the people who write software for them.


    I blame the hardware/network guys. I also blame nappyt whatever he is.



    Is this the beginnings of a little STR fling?\\:D/



    :lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:
     
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    Red Hot Sloth Banned

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    Evil Chocula,
    Cool. Do have the Evo or the XCL, man that Evo is a sweet looking ride. If I wasn't in love with my Heckler as much as my wife says I am ( I should marry it):?:, I would definetly get me one of those. If its the xcl, how well mannered is it, I always hear great things about 'em.
     
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    Red Hot Sloth Banned

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    Oh my...

    I feel so at home already, I must now go and get the movie to re-acquaint myself with the eighties again...thanks everyone.
     
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    Welcome, we've been expecting you'. :beer:
     
  13. Evil Chocula

    Evil Chocula ah buh bye now

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    Its an XCL. I think its the perfect bike for a La Costa type trail that you have to ride up. If I was looking for more of a shuttle bike, I'd go with the EVO. The XCL equates more to a Heckler, and the EVO to a Nomad, IMO.
     
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    Fired Yo Momma Kenny Powers!!!

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    I wanted the XCL as well but I think my next ride is going to be the EVO
     
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    guero iFroth

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    hucklers are great bikes! i miss mine. ec made some good comparisons in regards to the xcl being similar to the huckler travel/trail bike wise.
     
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    Evil Chocula ah buh bye now

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    By the way, how much does La Costa rock? :bang:
     
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    It totally rocks like Rob Halford Screaming for Vengeance
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    Heckler's rock!!! :bang:
     
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    i miss mine. :(
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    <--- Leaning waay back in my guitar hero stance....screaming.....YEEAAAHHH!!!!!!:clap:

     

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