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TylerSkyler · 02-09-2010, 01:49 AM

tell me what you think =)

http://vimeo.com/9318106

http://www.pinkbike.com/video/122000/#top

CA_descender · 02-09-2010, 03:53 AM

It ends a bit abruptly. Maybe take the the jump that is at 01:49, put it at the end and slow it down to 30% to 40%, slap an overlay of a hike-a-bike on it as well and fade the music out.

Nice vid though and the sequence at 00:40 with all that green is pretty sweet as well.

Abui · 02-09-2010, 04:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TylerSkyler

tell me what you think =)

http://vimeo.com/9318106

http://www.pinkbike.com/video/122000/#top

Jump at 1:35 has no continuity, from the change in perspective one excepts a different view of the preceeding jumps.

Braking/slowing riding at 2:16 conflicts with the overall theme of speed.

TylerSkyler · 02-09-2010, 06:13 AM

haha thanks but I wasn't to picky on the editing. It was 2am and I just wanted it done. But ill take those into consideration =)

Drum n MTB · 02-09-2010, 07:10 AM

I am not a fan of MGMT...so I don't like the song. I see what you were going for and that's cool, but I hate the song. The riding is awesome and that's the most important part.

wheezy · 02-09-2010, 08:03 AM

I like it. The ending is the only change I'd make. Just fade it out and call it done.

werldcup · 02-09-2010, 08:10 AM

I can't get my head around the Incycle pajamas. They look ridiculous.

Good riding though!

AtOurGates · 02-09-2010, 08:11 AM

Yeah - what they said. Great video, funny ending.

TylerSkyler · 02-09-2010, 01:18 PM

Well hey if you have a pinkbike...comment on the vid eh? haha
possible vod would be sick hahah
thanks guys

http://www.pinkbike.com/video/122000/#top

TylerSkyler · 02-09-2010, 01:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Abui

Jump at 1:35 has no continuity, from the change in perspective one excepts a different view of the preceeding jumps.

Braking/slowing riding at 2:16 conflicts with the overall theme of speed.

one expects that because thats how every video is. I strive to change things. Pluuuuuuus I was to lazy to get that many shots and walk back and forth

hahaha thanks though!

live_in_hilo@yahoo.com · 02-09-2010, 03:07 PM

great constructive criticism. i like the vid but imo, i dont think it'll make pinkbike vod. but i hope you get one. im hoping i get one as well one day.

Nagaredama · 02-09-2010, 04:08 PM

Cool video and riding but...take your number plate off.

02-09-2010, 01:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
TylerSkyler Senior Member	Final Edit tell me what you think =) http://vimeo.com/9318106 http://www.pinkbike.com/video/122000/#top __________________ www.myspace.com/doitonwater

02-09-2010, 03:53 AM	#2 (permalink)
CA_descender Startin' to groove again!	It ends a bit abruptly. Maybe take the the jump that is at 01:49, put it at the end and slow it down to 30% to 40%, slap an overlay of a hike-a-bike on it as well and fade the music out. Nice vid though and the sequence at 00:40 with all that green is pretty sweet as well. __________________ CORBA IMBA California CA_Descender's HOOK-It

02-09-2010, 06:13 AM	#4 (permalink)
TylerSkyler Senior Member	haha thanks but I wasn't to picky on the editing. It was 2am and I just wanted it done. But ill take those into consideration =) __________________ www.myspace.com/doitonwater

02-09-2010, 07:10 AM	#5 (permalink)
Drum n MTB STR Veteran	I am not a fan of MGMT...so I don't like the song. I see what you were going for and that's cool, but I hate the song. The riding is awesome and that's the most important part. __________________ “You can live to be a hundred if you give up all the things that make you want to live to be a hundred” - Woody Allen

02-09-2010, 08:03 AM	#6 (permalink)
wheezy DH Gorilla	I like it. The ending is the only change I'd make. Just fade it out and call it done. __________________ Wheezy Todd DIRT RACER PICS TODD AVERY PHOTO

02-09-2010, 08:10 AM	#7 (permalink)
werldcup Senior Member	I can't get my head around the Incycle pajamas. They look ridiculous. Good riding though! __________________ -Rondo ̿ ̿ '̿'̿\̵͇̿̿\з=(•̪●)=ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ Hook-it!

02-09-2010, 08:11 AM	#8 (permalink)
AtOurGates Member	Yeah - what they said. Great video, funny ending.

02-09-2010, 01:18 PM	#9 (permalink)
TylerSkyler Senior Member	Well hey if you have a pinkbike...comment on the vid eh? haha possible vod would be sick hahah thanks guys http://www.pinkbike.com/video/122000/#top __________________ www.myspace.com/doitonwater

02-09-2010, 03:07 PM	#11 (permalink)
live_in_hilo@yahoo.com hilo boi	great constructive criticism. i like the vid but imo, i dont think it'll make pinkbike vod. but i hope you get one. im hoping i get one as well one day.

02-09-2010, 04:08 PM	#12 (permalink)
Nagaredama	Cool video and riding but...take your number plate off.

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