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    It ends a bit abruptly. Maybe take the the jump that is at 01:49, put it at the end and slow it down to 30% to 40%, slap an overlay of a hike-a-bike on it as well and fade the music out.

    Nice vid though and the sequence at 00:40 with all that green is pretty sweet as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TylerSkyler View Post
    Jump at 1:35 has no continuity, from the change in perspective one excepts a different view of the preceeding jumps.

    Braking/slowing riding at 2:16 conflicts with the overall theme of speed.

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    haha thanks but I wasn't to picky on the editing. It was 2am and I just wanted it done. But ill take those into consideration =)

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    I am not a fan of MGMT...so I don't like the song. I see what you were going for and that's cool, but I hate the song. The riding is awesome and that's the most important part.
    “You can live to be a hundred if you give up all the things that make you want to live to be a hundred” - Woody Allen

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    I like it. The ending is the only change I'd make. Just fade it out and call it done.

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    I can't get my head around the Incycle pajamas. They look ridiculous.

    Good riding though!
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    Yeah - what they said. Great video, funny ending.

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    Well hey if you have a pinkbike...comment on the vid eh? haha
    possible vod would be sick hahah
    thanks guys

    http://www.pinkbike.com/video/122000/#top

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    Quote Originally Posted by Abui View Post
    Jump at 1:35 has no continuity, from the change in perspective one excepts a different view of the preceeding jumps.

    Braking/slowing riding at 2:16 conflicts with the overall theme of speed.
    one expects that because thats how every video is. I strive to change things. Pluuuuuuus I was to lazy to get that many shots and walk back and forth

    hahaha thanks though!

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    great constructive criticism. i like the vid but imo, i dont think it'll make pinkbike vod. but i hope you get one. im hoping i get one as well one day.

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    Cool video and riding but...take your number plate off.

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