The Ride - Chapter 8 (this one's for Gene)

[OMR]

Originally Posted by sdyeti

Sooo good!

Have you considered publishing it??

Glad you are enjoying it. It wasn't written to be published... just something I've wanted to see if I could do.

I'm having Nancy (wife) read it right now and will defer to her judgement. I'd also have to do a lot more fleshing out of the main characters. Let me know what you think after reading through chapter 12.

[sdyeti]

I totally see your point. Just some playful encouragement. Published or not, I can still enjoy it here

Originally Posted by OMR

Glad you are enjoying it. It wasn't written to be published... just something I've wanted to see if I could do.

I'm having Nancy (wife) read it right now and will defer to her judgement. I'd also have to do a lot more fleshing out of the main characters. Let me know what you think after reading through chapter 12.